An entertaining listen.

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This was a great way to spend my car ride to and from work. I l really enjoyed having both people doing the reading of this story per the multi pov. The story itself was entertaining, It did seem to lag a bit at times and seem a bit forced but all in all, I did enjoy it. I liked how the characters were portrayed. Max and Stella were both strong characters. There many different aspects to this story. Suspense, drama, romance, revenge, etc. I was kept on my toes on what would be happening next. Some things were pretty easy to predict while others were a complete surprise.

All in all, an entertaining audio book. I look forward to listening to this author and the narrators again in the future. They brought life and character to everyone portrayed in the book. Well done.

Would I recommend this audio book? Yes

Would I listen/read more from this author? Yes

Would I listen to these narrators again? Yes

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WHAT A LISTEN...... IT'S GOT IT ALL

Stella is independent, motivated and runs her own successful PR Company alongside her best friend..... she's about to make the pitch of her life to get a Sportwear Company called JOS out of some negative press which has badly damaged and impacted on their reputation as well as their finances. She's dressed for it, has a good Presentation ready for the appointed Executive and is mentally prepared to give it her all to get the business..... but all her thoughts (and speech) escape her when she's stopped in her tracks by the captivating eyes, body, power and charisma that is Maxwell McCoy the CEO and majority owner of Hurst & McCoy the Company that owns JOS. Time stands still as heated stares pass between them and, for a few moments, an intense connection was made but the spell was broken, they both snapped out of it and Stella regained her thoughts and powered on.... she was there to impress.

Jaded frustrated and deeply concerned, Maxwell knows someone is messing up his late Father's business but all he can do at this moment is reputation recovery and they need a good PR company but the Executive that was tasked with the job of finding a company is, for some reason, stalling so he decides to 'sit in' on the next interview. But when the beautiful and curvy owner of Sullivan PR walks in their instant connection alerted all his senses and woke up his dormant heart. And when she starts to give her brilliant strategy ideas he knows it isn't only paperwork and ideas that he wants to share.

However, the handsome Billionaire has some painful secrets and he knows he has to tread very carefully but he's determined that he isn't going to let the feeling and Stella slip away and Stella is equally as impressed with the real man behind so many Gossip Columns and the title of Most Eligible Batchelor. So..... he offered, she accepted and, over business dinners and meetings, their chemistry grew into sizzling touches, passion-filled kisses and lust-filled thoughts. But, as Stella and Max were trying to salvage the Company, there was someone hiding in the wings trying to destroy it.... and Max and Stella's relationship too - no matter the cost - and they are willing to do anything to do it.

This instantly addictive listen has a full cast of great characters, a hot and sexy romance with plenty of passion, a drama-filled suspense as corruption, deceit, greed, jealousy and revenge heats up resulting in bloodshed, kidnapping and heartache and I found myself mentally pointing my finger at who I thought the villain was.... which constantly changed. There's also a very likeable, strong and sensible heroine together with a possessive, caring, understanding, passionate, loving and very sexual Alpha hero who's got a dirty mouth and he knows just how to use it. Their feelings and raw desire leaps out at you and their struggles, pitfalls and pain swallow you up until the very end.

Worth a credit? It's a very entertaining and captivating dual POV romantic/suspense story which was made even more pleasurable by Kai and Wen's narrating style where they each stick to their own gender's voices which means the chapters flow smoothly like realistic conversations and that's where the magic's found. It's also got some very witty parts because of the banter between the main and secondary characters. Yes, worth a credit or buy..... and yes worth the dark circles and bloodshot eyes because I stayed up till dawn listening to it.

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great listen

I really love listen to this book. ready for more books by them. GREAT JOB

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Smoke Screen audio

I absolutely loved this audio book. I would highly recommend this book. Good book.and absolutely fantastic narration.

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Fairly Good

This book is an erotic romance

Maxwell McCoy's father business is in jeopardy and he needs a clean up company and Stella has just what he is looking for, but he has to convince her he wants more than business from her.

Stella Sullivan is starting a small business and is expanding when she offers Hurst and McCoy a way out of a political disaster. When she sets eyes on the CEO Max her plans are going to change right before her eyes.

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Holy Smokes!!!

I have only made it to chapter 16 and it's smoking hot! I love the story. Its very detailed and the depth of each character is amazing. The use of the narrator's with each other instead of each narrator making the opposite voices is a real enjoyable treat.

Cannot wait to see where the story goes. I'll update review when I get to the end. it was just soooooooo juicy that I couldn't wait. I can't put it down!!!

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I loved this story; it started like most but after your gathering details it just gets a twist.

What I didn't like was as much time as was spent on his homemate. She was lame n perditible. But I loved the rest.
I'd recommend this story to anyone who enjoys romance stories, with a story.

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Can’t Get Over Narration

From reading other reviews, it’s clear that I’m in the minority, but I really don’t like this narration style (where each actor performs their own dialogue even when the chapter is from the other’s POV). In real life, what we hear is filtered through our own perceptions, so to have one narrator perform all the parts in their chapter feels more real to me. I also found the male narrator here particularly grating and stilted, but some of that might be the writing.

To wit, there is a lot of “telling not showing” in this book. And to my ear, that telling feels patronizing to both me and the female lead, Stella. It’s full of “It’s going to happen this way.” “What if I don’t want it that way.” “I know what’s best, trust me.” “Ok.” ... “Now that it’s blown up in my face let me explain all the things that I COULD have told you before but chose not to because I know what’s best.”

Honestly, I just don’t respect any of the characters or their choices, so I’m returning this one half way through.

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Maybe it's just me, but

He was an insecure, jealous, bossy semi-stalker. She started out so independent, a capable business owner, then fell for the rich guy who wanted to tell her what to do all the time. Even though she complained about it, she never put her foot down, and went along with all of his decisions about her business and personal life. I just couldn't buy it. The narration was great, though!

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who doesn't love a man like this

Smokescreen is a fun and drama filled adventure. Things aren't easy for this troublesome duo. Working against a lot of different variables...

It's a hardship falling for Max...not. He's sweet, sexy, and even though he's bossy- perfect. It's a wonder that he made it so long...

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