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The Mystic's Fighter Audiobook By Joanna Emerson cover art

Awful execution. Did chat gpt write this?? 😭

Overall
1 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-07-24

A very interesting concept. Wish literally anyone else would have done something with it. Very similar writing style to E.L. James (not a compliment). Dialog was unnatural, clunky and unintentionally awkward. It was often hard to tell who was speaking, as well as character motivations. This is not the computer reader's fault!! It genuinely had nothing but hot garbage to work with.
No character arc. Just a choppy meandering stream of "thought". Characters monolog past each other rather than actually speak to one another. Frequently characters would ask each other questions and they would ignore each other. The "poetry" rarely made sense or added to the story. Scenes would start and stop randomly. Especially near the end. It's a shame, I wanted to love this. The "author" fought me on it and won. Its like a less fun less funny more glitchy Oblivion or Skyrim set in Jim Crow Cincinnati? I'm really not clear on the time period.
Hopefully some AO3 writer will come along and fix this.

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reformist but a good start

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-30-22

lot of great info here. would recommend those looking for more to look into psych abolition, psych survivors and Mad Movement

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