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Trust the Reader

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-31-24

The repetition of reminders is annoying. We know...we know...WE KNOW!! You don't have to stuff us full of reminders before every scene that will play on facts we learned beforehand...we know!
Now for the suffragette movement and a strong female lead - great! I'm all for it. But um...is the simpy behavior for the male lead necessary? Why must the male leads in these books tear themselves down and proclaim that they're less-than, just to show that the female is strong? It's not entertaining and really comes off as lazy writing - an easy slap in to stuff the character arc - and most definitely takes from the movement struggling to be portrayed in this book.
Now let's mention the cookie-cutter outline of the plot. Gang bad - someone gets an owie and requires protection - filler and annoying repetition - leads spark - more filler and repetition - simp gets frightened and asks for marriage under a ridiculous reason - female lead flexes and declares "I won't, their will be no, I'm not---" - climax - let down.

-- anywho...on to the next in the series. No, I do not recommend.

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Sluggish near the middle and end

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4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-12-24

Good characters, okay story. Far too much back and forth drama that slows it down. A few times I considered closing the app and pretending I never started it. Decent ending, I'd read a sequel if one ever dropped. Overall - meh.

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An Excellent Listen

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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-09-24

I have to say, this was my favorite so far. It left me wanting more as the story came to an end, yet raised my hopes for the next. Is it Veronica's turn? I love how her talent was brought to light, and that last bit at the end? Terrific! Thank you, and I will keep an eye out for the next.

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Harping on

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-06-24

A decent story if given more attention by the author. Without extra details within the story such as world building, more interactions between characters, etc, the "we didn't agree to more - no love - marriage of convenience" repetition became grating. Yes that is the whole point of the story, but it grew old very fast.

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An excellent story!

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-04-23

Very twisted and pushes you to the edge of your seat, wanting to hear more, to learn what happens next. While not for everyone, I highly recommend it.

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very well done

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-17-23

I remember reading this back when it was new, on other fiction sites. Hearing it now gives it a new life, a fresh light. I am very happy for this author, and all they have accomplished. Looking forward to the next book, 4064.

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I was not expecting this.

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-04-23

I selected this as a simple result from a Google search - long story and not the point. Anyway, I am extremely picky and easily distracted if the characters do not hook me right off the bat. I binged this, missed sleep, and struggled through the next working day because this story would not let me go. So many twists, hints dropped - I thought I was clever! Ha, kind of but not really. The ending twist! WOW, did not see that coming and I loved it.

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