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Möbius 1
- The Timeless Artifact, Book 1
- By: Brandon Q. Morris
- Narrated by: Shawn Compton
- Length: 10 hrs and 47 mins
- Unabridged
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Overall4 out of 5 stars 63
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Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 56
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Story4 out of 5 stars 56
It is 2056. Mathematics professor Elisabeth Gabai is fascinated by multi-dimensional forms that have no equivalent in reality. Then, her boss sends her to the site of an artifact that might have come straight from her theories—or from the technology of an advanced civilization. Twenty-eight years earlier, physicist Max Webber is hell-bent on improving Einstein’s theories of relativity. His latest concept seems flawless, except it predicts the end of humanity. The extinction of Earth can only be prevented if Max can locate a multi-dimensional object.
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5 out of 5 stars
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Wow! Great find.
- By Fishmannz on 10-02-22
- Möbius 1
- The Timeless Artifact, Book 1
- By: Brandon Q. Morris
- Narrated by: Shawn Compton
The writer needs an editor
Reviewed: 11-04-22
Mediocre writing decays into a universe where people do and say things that just don’t make any sense. Lazy “by the way” additions of fact to support preposterous scenarios, demonstrate a lack of a structured, thought out story. The writers friends should have waved a flag and helped prevent this from coming to press. Tucked inside, there is a story worth telling and with some professional guidance, the author might have had a chance to tell it.
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