Olivia K

Could a heroine be so annoying!!!

Reviewed: 07-04-18

This heroine was so annoying. I read the first one and thought just maybe it would have gotten better. But this narrator was so not very good. It was like nails on a chalk board. The more I read the more I didn’t like her. Might think about getting dual narration because she was just as annoying as the male role. With that being said the story was sweet like sugar. I purchased the whole series which could have been done as one book instead of these 3hour or more I might have been a light better at getting through the series.

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Very hot!!!

Reviewed: 12-10-17

Only thing I didn’t agree with was the disrespect the heroine had for the hero in the beginning when she arrived at the condo. Stating what he could and couldn’t do. It was his home she was the guest. Overall great story.

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O wow

Reviewed: 01-13-17

I'm not sure what to say... first off the female narrator was the most annoying person to read this story. She sounded like a teenager with a selfish attitude. I couldn't finish this story... Now for the male narrator, he was ok, not my favorite but much better than the female one. I really liked this author who is new to me. If she could I would hope there is a do over for this story.

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I love this series

Reviewed: 07-21-16

First let's see oh right what was wrong with jet she gives the blonds in this world a bad rap. She didn't listen to anything anyone ever said to her. She constantly gets in trouble which could have easily been avoided if she listened hence the word listen. Eddie told her often enough how he felt about her and over her ditzy blond head it went. Otherwise the story was just as good as her other books love it .

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How annoying the female character was

Reviewed: 07-25-15

Swan is the most annoying character, her constant needy behavior and then her kick ass warrior persona is so confusing at times. I could see this type of behavior as the young 20 year old she is. I think if she was going to fall for man 30 years old that her immaturity comes out at different times during the story. How many times does Smoke have to constantly tell her he is with her. Hence her maturity level with dealing with a man who is more mature. Her constant complaining makes me not want to keep reading. But I never gave up I stuck it out and finished the story. I hope in the next one she matures and really understand her man loves only her. Smoke was the most honorable man to her and for her. Yes he has a temper but he was always apologizing to Swan about his past which he said to her was in the past. All he ever asked of her was to watch how she spoke to the MC and to think before she spoke and yet again she judged everyone before she even met them hence the maturity level of a 20 year old. In my opinion the Swan character really had anger issues more so then Smoke. She was so jealous. Her communication skills sucked. Overall both books had great story lines and yes I liked the story overall.

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Wow

Reviewed: 06-15-15

The only problem with this series is the narrator she sucked. Maybe you should have had a male narrator too she sounded like a robot. I have this series in digital and it's very good. If this series could be done over choose a male.

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Wow!!!

Reviewed: 06-07-15

The story overall was good. I had read the kindle version and that was well written. The only thing I found annoying was the narrator maybe a different narrator would have been better her voice wasn't very good with the men parts that were read.

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Good story

Reviewed: 05-16-15

Let's see
The overall book was good. I like stories like this BDSM, but the heroine in the story was very selfish, that being said I mean she was told that honesty and trust were the most important in that relationship and yes it was a BDSM relationship. Why she worried all the time what others thought when her men were the ones who kept her safe. She also should have always told them if she had troubles. No matter if she was supposedly was keeping them safe. She wanted to run from herself. Anywho, the story was good.

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Narrated

Reviewed: 01-01-15

The person telling the store was boring she was annoying, the overall story was ok but if another person could have told the story it might have been ok.

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