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Ending lacking

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-11-25

Good story that kept me engaged although completely unrealistic at times. Could have used an Epilogue. Something further into the future to see their growing relationship and success. Maybe even building their family. Worst thing for a reader or listener to be fully engaged and then let down by an abrupt lackluster ending.

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Missed opportunities

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-01-25

SPOILERS Author missed so many opportunities to make this story great. One was only having one time in the story mentioning the FMCs hockey knowledge. She impressed them with her knowledge once and could have done so many more times to demonstrate her knowledge and solidify her deserved role as Assistant GM. It would have been fun hearing her do that more often. There could have been more opportunities in the story to have more meaningful scenes between the MCs to show more depth to their characters and their growing relationship. And a huge disappointment was only one POV. This also contributed to the lack of substance in the story. A good Epilogue showing more of their future together would have been nice. With that said I'll give the 2nd book a chance to see if this improves. So for me this book was just okay but could have been great.

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Grrr to the Author

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-30-25

SPOILER What kind of ending was that?! No bonding with all 7 of her mates FINALLY at the end as it should've been. Then left with a cliffhanger leading to a potential for another book. Seriously??? As a reader fully engrossed in the story and characters only to be disappointed in the lackluster abrupt ending or actually there was no real ending. Just left hanging...

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Just okay

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-28-25

Pace was slow at first but expected a much better ending. After much anticipation they just end it with sex and a cheesy line of they lived happily ever after. gag

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Ending lackluster

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-17-25

Enjoyed story and characters however many things not addressed during rushed ending. Author needs to work on her endings and add an Epilogue to show some of their future together. Very disappointed

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Nice series

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-10-25

Really needed an extended Epilogue with a look further into the future for all of the couples. It would have been a nice way to wrap up the entire series.

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The male narrator had the worst female voice

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4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-04-25

Only comment is the male narrator makes the most horrible female voice. I actually laughed most of the time listening to it...so awful 🤣

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Therapy needed

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-01-25

Sean and Dom will always have my heart. And what happened to Dom was devastating. I've never balled my heart out so much reading any other book. The emotions through the first 2 books was almost too much. Credit to the author and narrators for truly bringing this story to life with all the feels. I didn't feel too much for Tobias until this book. I still never felt the instant attraction the author tried to provoke between him and Celeste. I really wanted Sean and Dom for her. They had so much more chemistry with her. Tobias stole her and never deserved her. Still pained me for the book to end with Sean's POV even though I understood. Seeing further into the future for Celeste and Tobias would have been nice. Wanted to see her as a Mom even though I still think it could have been with Sean at least. Ugh...I'll never get over it. Sigh...

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Loved the storyline and spice BUT

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-26-25

This story really needed an additional chapter and extended Epilogue or even a bonus chapter to really provide a good HEA. Fell short of seeing further into future. So invested in the characters so the ending felt incomplete for me. Still worth the read but disappointed.

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Disappointing Epilogue

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-16-25

Loved the hard fought perfect HEA for Ash but disappointed that there was no further look into the future and their children or any resolution for Bri and Knight. Would have preferred the bonus content focus on that instead of lengthy plug for the next book. Appreciate the author offered extra scenes but could have been used for the future. Makes the story feel incomplete. Dislike when the author pushes you to read the next book to potentially get some scraps on their future.

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