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Alexander Mundy meets Indiana Jones

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-03-19

Former thief for the government finds peace in one of his true passions: art and archeology until the remains of a notorious art smuggler and thief are found at his dig site, and our hero is pulled back into service. For the last time, honest guys. I found the plot solid, though a little slow during the second act and I’m not sure about the romantic twist the story took. The end made me genuinely smile even if I found the scene on the last cache a little out of tone. There were hints dropped previously but it still earned a little side eye.

The writing has a lot of potential, but relies pretty strongly on verbs to break up the dialog which is what really reminds me of my text based rp days. I would have liked to see a bit more character depth. Tessa was kind of disappointing for a woman and for a State Department agent. She often came off pouty or juvenile which is disappointing and also odd for a government agent.

The narrator did well, his Fuller accent was spot on though I am pretty sure he mispronounced Persephone. But I have trouble with the name as well so, no shade just a little note. There are some fun lines that made me laugh, and I enjoyed the story quite a bit. Glad I gave this a read.

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