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Rich Action, Poor Romance

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-15-23

wooden love interest forced into the story as a lever for climatic drama in later chapters. Stalled an otherwise captivating plot. if you've ever seen "inside out" where they show a mass produced imaginary boyfriend that only repeats "I would die for Riley". that's what I kept picturing the love interest being like.

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One of the best in the series.

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-15-22

With the added Novella, the scope explodes in every direction. Subtle hints and obscure references make this a fun addition to contemplate.

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Side Notes

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 10-01-22

Longest grocery list I've ever listened to. I know authors must set up events or close gaps but this book was a singular effort to do so. Not really a novella in itself. Just a reading of Mr. Mancours notes on what I'm guessing were for his next book. Not worth the money.

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Audible limits the amount of words used in reviews

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-02-22

A surprising amount gets accomplished in this shortish installment. I'm eagerly awaiting Jason's next evolution.

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WOOOOO

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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-12-22

It's incredible to see the evolution of the character and the writer happen at the same time. Both refining their crafts. Something very Meta about that.
I took 1 star away from the so far excellent performance of the narrator for missing the iconic WOOOOO! You had a golden opportunity Mr. Miller and you squandered it.

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Pete and Repeat

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-09-22

I love the overall story arc. However, the repeated detail of each power and ability every time it's used takes me out of the story. It loses the timing, be it action, suspense or revelation. The characters and plot are great. Just stop reading us the DMs guide book in the middle of what is happening.

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Needs Character Development.

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3 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-22-21

It's easy to see the story lines the author is trying to explore. However he fails to build up any foundation for more than just the main arc. If he were to spend more effort on character development, and treat them less like a D&D spreadsheet he could really have something here.

The narrator should also develope more voice diversity. All of the female dialogue sounds the same, and the male voices only have 4 options.

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