Interesting, But A Little Confusing

I want to say upfront that I enjoyed this story overall. The technological concepts were very interesting, the plot was engaging, and the depiction of alternate modes of human existence was very provocative.

That being said, there are some distracting flaws that really lowered my enjoyment of this story.

First of all, while Mr. Williams made a good start on setting up this universe with technologies and alternative modes of human existence, he neglected to flesh it all out and explain it properly. It leaves the audience confused and bewildered at all the terms being thrown around.

For example, how is a gestalt like the Jinc different from a Fort, which is also a group mind? How is it that Fort minds can span the entire galaxy when they can only communicate at the speed of light and there are only a few hundred "frags" altogether to cover that distance? How is Q-looping more desirable than other forms of communication for Forts?

A lot of other details are glossed over as well, leaving only vague references for the imagination to work with. It makes a lot of the characters' motives and actions very hard to understand.

And the character who speaks only in Gary Newman lyrics? That was a terrible idea! In the introduction, Mr. Williams said that he didn't want to reveal which character it was... but it becomes extremely obvious.

Not to mention extremely annoying! Seriously, the guy drones on and on in nothing but reconstituted song lyrics... it adds nothing to the story except for the threat of a headache! If Mr. Williams was trying to be clever and profound, he failed.

Because of these flaws, I took two stars off of my rating. But I still feel that this was a worthwhile buy for the reasons I mentioned earlier. I plan on buying the next book in the series and would recommend others listen to this book for themselves.

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Good but

The way he wrote Render to speak in riddles gets annoying pretty much immediately. Thankfully he doesn’t play that big a speaking part so I wouldn’t avoid it for that.

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Slow to start, then a bit confusing

It took a long time for this book to get going. The early parts were confusing and a bit disconnected. Once it got rolling, it was definitely more engaging.

The idea of a resurrected character, male in a female body, with missing memories, is intriguing. But sometimes it was just tedious.

I'd say that the characters could be better developed, and the sweeping mysteries could be less annoying.

I enjoyed it, and will probably listen to more.

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Not a super easy listen

I'm not sure if it was the story or the narration, but I had trouble keeping my mind on the story. I can't say there is something specific wrong with the narration and at the end, my over-all opinion of the story is good. I'd listen to the book a second time to figure it out, but I just don't have the patience or time right now. It wasn't a bad story and at the end, I was interested in what was going to happen in book 2, but not enough to get the book right now. The narration was understandable and didn't have any annoying "things" going on, but my mind kept drifting off the story, I found it easy enough to put the story down at night, and I'm not chomping at the bit to get book 2. Good, just not great. If I see book 2 on sale, or run out of other interesting stories, I might give it a listen.

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tedious is right

I gave this one over 4 hours to try to capture my attention but I didn't like the characters, the story, or the narration. BTW, I love good sf and have read and listened to lots of it.

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