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Lots of messy drama

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-12-25

The book feels forced with an overdose of drama. To messy for me and I'll stop the series now.

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To much whining and self pitying

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-03-24

series has potential, but leans to heavy of whining and self pity. Lacks most of the fun personality the first book had.

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To many cliffhangers and forced drama.

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-29-23

The authors love for cliffhangers and constant forced drama, makes the story and experience exhausting.

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Feels off, and voice is more whine then bad *ss

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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-27-21

This book feels like a money grabber, made in a hurry. dont capture the feel of the series. also the voice is all wrong

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The Monarch Papers Audiobook By C.J. Bernstein cover art

Exciting way of telling a story, but no red string

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-20-21

The story takes an unusual and but exciting approach to imagine the magical world. Its not perfect, but i will try the second book. Im curios about the story and how the author evolves.
Don't expect a red string to this story, but if you are looking for a new approach to story telling, Then this book its worth a closer look.

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Not his best work. The book feels forced

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 10-02-20

Too much gloom and doom.
Made the book feel forced, and the attempt of humor did not save the story.

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Feels like a side story or a spin off

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-07-20

This book is good, but not at the same level as the other books in this series.
With the change in focus to the other minor characters, this story felt like a side story or a spin off series.
The humor is not as sharp as the other books, and felt a bit forced at times.
The book is worth reading, but I hope the next book in the series will be more like the first 3 books In the series.

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New narrator, New MC, should be a side story!

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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 08-10-19

With a new narrator, and new main character. New writing style and focus. This is a side story or a new series. not book 7....

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Fun book, but missing charm

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-25-18

Fun book, but the age of the main character feels very wrong.

The “internal” dialog and the adult conversation does not feel like a 12-13 year old.

The adults talks to her as an equal, discussing and wanting her opinion on world changing subject.
The teachers ask more for help, then providing guidance. Given advanced tasks, and displays very rational thought patterns. For a “kid” there a too few games, and messing around. Too many “grownups” ideas and dialogs, and too little hormones.

I would like to see her learn and fail more. She knows too much, and is too perfect for a fresh student.

The book main character would be more plausible with an age between 17-24 years

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A book for Young adults, with a little more depth

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-30-17

A book for Young adults, with a little more depth than usual.

The main layout is very basic: Young main person, that don’t fit in. Has a mysterious past. Runs away. Becomes awesome over night and everyone loves her.
The sub story and long term plot, has a little more depth than the normal young adults book. I hope the story will develop and maybe make the hero a little less “perfect and awesome”.

The bad side of the story is that the main character gets a lot of quick fixes and become perfect and gets an easy solution in every situation. The skill system for the hero is based on growing internal “modifications”. This skill system gets over used in this book, and saves to many situations, without any big struggles for the hero.

The story has potential, but I hope for a better and less awesome hero in book two.

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