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Harriet

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Contrived story, dreadful reader

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-24-23

I stuck with it until 20 minutes from end. Had wanted to quit much earlier because the reader is unbearable but forced myself to keep on in hopes of a miraculous improvement in the story. Hopes unfulfilled, i quit wasting my time.

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Unbearable narration

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-25-23

I had to quit the book in chapter one as the narrator’s contrived, histrionic style ruins both the writing and the plot. I recall recoiling at this narrator’s melodrama previously — other Hurwitz, maybe a Reacher or two — so shame on me for going ahead and purchasing this one.

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had to quit halfway through

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1 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-14-21

The apparent protagonist appears to be stupid; any suspense affecting her is due to repetition of stupid decisions. No likeable characters, no one to root for, no plausible scenarios. The only thrills come when she might get caught, but in each instance i wanted her to get caught so the story would stop dead in its tracks. I hate leaving a story without knowing “what happens” but in this case i could not suffer it all the way to the end.

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Engrossing story

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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-16-21

A very satisfyng legal thriller. Occasionally over-plotted but consistently compelling. The narrator verged a little too close to a babytalk voice, tho. I got used to it but would have preferred a voice and tone that matched the smarts and purposiveness of the main character.

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Nice prose, Poor plot

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2 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 10-16-18

Elegiac, loving descriptions of a place at a particular moment in time. Plot was implausible and betrayed both characters and readers.

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Some people never learn

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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-21-18

Presidential homily at end is more sanctimonious and cringe-worthy than Clinton’s 1984 excruciatingly long DNC speech

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Scottoline is back

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 12-31-14

Recent works have been either tired or contrived. Betrayed puts Scottoline back on the track she followed when I first discovered her. The story is engrossing, the narrative is smart, the twists are actual twists, and the murder is a mystery for a good long while.

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Narrators don't know proper pronunciation

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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-10-14

Is there anything you would change about this book?

The resolution of the whodunit seemed contrived.

Who was your favorite character and why?

Not sure. I couldn't relate to the characters I wanted to like. But I found them interesting, if weak and vulnerable.

How could the performance have been better?

The narrators' lack of familiarity with elementary English words is astonishing. Mispronunciation at critical moments totally ruined the flow of the story. "Sangween" for "sanguine", for example. Gross mispronunciation coming out of the mouth of the hoity toity character totally undermined her.

Could you see A Circle of Wives being made into a movie or a TV series? Who should the stars be?

No. The story is too contrived. Maybe a Lifetime soapy drama, but nothing more.

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