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A Smith

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Not worth the time, sorry.

Overall
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-19-22

The story was clunkily written with quite a few logic holes and overused cliches.

The narration wasn't bad, but wasn't great. A couple of mispronounced phrases and odd stresses and pauses, but far from the worst I've heard.

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The performance distracted from the story

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
1 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-25-22

The female narrator paused frequently, randomly, and awkwardly. She broke up sentences and phrases, and really made this one hard to get through.

The story wasn't bad, but a bit simplistic for infinite multiple realities.

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Powerful story, great narration.

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-13-22

This is an interesting, well crafted novel. The narration was perfect. I strongly recommend this book.

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The hell of it is the writing is getting better...

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-10-22

...but the characters still use all the same phrases. The author is good at world building and setting up interesting stories, but he reuses the same phrases over and over. In his own words, "that only happens in bad movies!" With a good editor and more differentiated characters, this author has the potential for 5 star content.

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Needs a good editor

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
2 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-12-21

If the author need to constantly say that plot points "only happen in bad movies," then maybe they shouldn't be in the story. Also, some specific phrases were used with multiple characters, taking away from their individuality. The performer also had a distracting accent that didn't mesh with the high-society characters.

There is some good world building and interesting themes. The book/author has potential, and with a good, heavy-handed editor this would have been a much better read.

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