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Good but lacking growth.

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-13-24

Enjoying the story overall, as well as the performance, but I am struggling with how stupid the 3 MCs are.

There's just not enough growth/learning and they're continually under-utilising their abilities, resources and opportunities in such obvious ways. It makes it hard to be sympathetic towards them when they're always shooting themselves in the foot. Poor Daniel seems to be getting totally pushed to the side and painted as nothing but a meatshield, as yet was meant to be the golden child? confusing!

also -1 for shitty cliffhanger ending. Poor form on an already short story with a slow release schedule.

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A slow descent into smarmy sex fluff

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-15-23

This started off as one of my top ever LiTRPG series, but the pace and content has changed so much.....


The cheesey sex talk and boys will be boys pervy crap has dramatically increased each book, and it's really painful.....


I think the first book had a great amount, enough that it was entertaining, even funny sometimes. Now it's so frequent and predictable that it's just frustrating and really 'immersion breaking'. It's seriously detracting from the whole experience.....



Finally, I fully understand that the story has changed from 'running for our lives and every encounter is a fight to survive' to 'base building and community construction' but the meetings are getting a bit too much. Matt needs to stick to what he's planned/promised and let the girls take over the dungeon. Which means we need to hear less about their process/justification and rather hear more succinct updates/reports.......



We're working our way from one man's survival of the apocalypse to full blown intergalactic planetary war of species survival. Let's make sure we don't lose momentum before the big baddie even arrives!


......I very rarely write reviews, but I love this series and because I know I'm going to continue reading it, I'd like to try contribute towards each instalment being an improvement, rather than a descent into smarmy sex fluff.

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Far too long, despite almost no progression

Overall
1 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 02-07-22

Books 1-3 are some of my favourite LitRPG works to date, but this book's feels like it was written by someone else entirely, and by someone paid by the word.

Nothing actually happens, no one grows and there's no major plot development, yet it's a huge book. I went from super pumped on its arrival to actually giving up on trying to finish it.

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Love the politics, characters & urban fantasy vibe

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-13-22

I thought Book 4 was fantastic and a step up from book 3. it's definitely a change of pace, but that's expected from a transition in arcs.

I'm shocked at how many reviews seem surprised/upset by the political commentary in the story. I don't understand how someone could think that Magical institutions embroiled with modern day governments, in a current day Earth setting wouldn't be a hugely politicised situation?

Also... lol at all the butthurt Americans triggered by the tiniest bit of bad press, feeling targeted despite the fact Jason rips on his own Aussie govt. just as much, if not more 😂

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A dramatic decline into the creepy and cringey

Overall
1 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 11-30-21

I've been really enjoying the story overall up until this book. The narrative and world building were coming along fine but this book just turned into some nerds wish fulfilment creep-fest.

The portion of this book dedicated to poorly written creeping of the MC on his Bebe dragon is ridiculous. I really don't need the father-daughter bestiality development on top of the cringey and over-done sex obsession the MC has with Mrs Zerker.

I swear every second sentence is either about their shape, smell or how bad he wants to fuck them both.

Please author, just have a wank before you start writing each day for the next book okay?

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Exceptional!

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 08-26-21

A breath of fresh air in a stagnant genre! Reminiscent of Legend of the Arch Magus

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