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isabella McGregor

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Hot garbage power fantasy

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2 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-15-25

I'm genuinely stunned that this has such a high review meta, because it's easily the most mediocre story I've read in forever. The characters aren't even one dimensional, they're barely clinging to existence. The MC is a mindless slab of meat that wins every encounter by throwing himself face first into the meat grinder and walks out the other end with more power ups.
There is no tension over whether he'll overcome a challenge because he always wins. There's no character development because his entire personality is "i hit things and get stronger " It's been a while since I've read the previous book and I didn't remember most the cast, including some of the main characters, because they're all very forgettable appendages of the MC that act as substitutes for his personality.
I realize the bar for this genre is low, but stories like these epitome and perpetual the "litrpg slop" meme

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Favorite of the series so far !

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-15-25

I really enjoyed the fast paced, action packed mood of this book. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops now that it feels to be coming more into its own

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Really wanted to like it

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-13-25

Despite the very heavy "inspiration" the series takes from other LitRPGs, it was a fun story at first, but there isn't enough world building to make the story feel centered. Everything feels arbitrary and improvised and the MC stumbles through one world ending event after another with the thickest plot armor I've ever seen. The characters also feel like the same person... everyone lives for quipy one liners and snark, from grunt soliders to gods.
It feels like the author got lost in the inspiration and hasn't really made this world their own.

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The most amazing tournament arc I've ever read!

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-07-25

Just when I thought the ending had blown my mind, Will doubles down and throws divine intervention at us. The tournament itself is amazing the growth both personal and in power among the cast is phenomenal. I cant wait to see where things go from here!

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Such an amazing read!

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-07-25

At this point in the series I've grown very fond of most of the cast, but this installment really brings it to another level. The personal revelation each of the new lord's experiences is brilliantly crafted. A truly genius melding of the worlds mystical nature and their personal growth both literally and as characters.
Charity is quickly growing to be my new favorite character to hate. Like harmony, she seems to embody the opposite of her namesake and makes me better appreciate why the Akura clan is so feared.

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Amazing transition to a new arc

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-06-25

It's nice to have the first chapter of the story wrapped up, but I wasn't a huge fan of how the duel was handled. The rank disparity should have invalidated it, especially since his opponent was able to draw from powers entirely outside of their rank and Lyndon wasn't allowed to use anything above his own. Or Aython could have simply killed the old geezer and invalidated the need for the battle. I do love the new element of his new integrated weapon though and can't wait to see how it develops.

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Amazing end to an amazing story

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-26-25

Every book in this series has been an absolute banger and while I'm sad to see it come to an end, I couldn't have asked for a better ending. This series is a gem and I cant wait to see what the author creates for us in the future 🙌

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Amazing performance carrying a confusing story

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-24-25

I've really enjoyed the series, but don't really recognize it anymore. Most of the story's origins feels abandoned and unfinished. I get that the author is taking us into a new arc, but it feels premature and forced. Exploring the new universe is appealing but I wish things in the existing universe were wrapped up before diving into another journey. It would also be amazing if the MC wasn't constantly hobbled every time he gains new powers. His progress is starting to feel pointless, because it's assumed his new powers will either be nullified by the environment or someone will injure his new ability and take it off the table. Why bother giving him new powers just to take it away a moment later ?

Hopefully the next book brings things to a conclusion. I've enjoyed the journey but it feels played out

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Amazing performance but aimless storytelling

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-23-25

This felt more like the start of a new series rather than a continuation of this series. The introduction of new power concepts and paradigms don't feel organic and leaves so much unfinished from the last book. The major crisis also feels very forced and falls into the benevolent hero trope that I hoped would have faded by now. The MC never learns the lesson beat into him from five books ago to not leave enemies behind who've made it explicitly clear their only goal is to kill him, but he just let's them walk away, so they can regroup and put him and everyone he holds dear in mortal damger.... again.

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Decent continuation, but felt a bit hollow

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-22-25

The training arc didn't really accomplish much other than the MC gaining "enlightenment" which doesn't seem to help him at a critical moment at the end of the book. The reconciliation and forgiving of someone who's repeatedly betrayed and tried to kill him and his friends and family repeatedly doesn't make much sense either. I've really enjoyed the series so far, but this one fell a bit flat for me

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