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Simple

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Reviewed: 02-25-23

I just finished Blue Screens of Death, another System Apocalypse short story.

This one is short and sweet. It’s kind of depressing, ur a part of that is just my own personal problems.

This kind of thing, the “it was all a dream” thing is a little close to the one trope that triggers panic attacks for me. The “you were in a mental hospital” version is what does it.

The use of Lanna and the others makes it cute but sad. The glitches suck but he gets to see what a world could have been, a normal world.

The one way I would have changed it is by giving them a triad relationship and see what happens, lol.

In any case, I think this takes place in between the second and third trilogies so it’s pretty simple.

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Spoiler

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Reviewed: 02-25-23

I just finished valentines in an apocalypse, another short story in the System Apocalypse universe.

Wow this one was really cool, as well as kind of bittersweet. I really liked seeing the organization stuff that happened in beteeen these books because it’s something we don’t get to see from Jhon.

The library thing is fascinating, I think I would like it if at the end of book 12 Jhon donated the quester library to earth, because it would then become the single largest repository of all knowledge, but that’s probably be unlikely.

The main charecters are great non combat classes. Librarian would be one of the classes I’d want to start with if I had a choice, while linguist is super useful.

Its cute how well they know eachother, even when they are doing things that ish r. Or Al for them such as the love stuff. I like seeing more as time goes on and these are cute characters.

The sad part is the mention of Lanna. It’s cool to see her take charge, and I think this takes place in between the time period where John is gone. The line “she has a thing against chocolates for some reason” is just… SO sad. Oh my gods.

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Fun

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Reviewed: 02-25-23

I just read A New Script, which was kind of interesting.

The basic concept is that this group has a specialized concept. They use non combat classes and specialized roles for some really useful skills.

The script idea is that they are combat actors. It’s a cute idea, and with things like editing, scripting, and direction they can make their roles work. It’s like the Poet that showed up in the main series, just back at the beginning.

I like that they choose to do more, and it would be nice to see where they ended up later on. I mean, it seems to be pretty early on in the timeline, so hopefully they do well enough.

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Good

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Reviewed: 02-15-23


This is a really good book, showing a very different prospective from the cores of both the main series and the other side series. It’s fascinating that the system throws violence on them all, but they react in different ways due to their emotional state and the pasts they have.

This book stars a bounty Hunter war vet, someone who’s seen combat before in a way unmatched by either the MC of the main series or the other side series. His background informs how he works towards his goals.

The system is the same, and we don’t really get any more additions to it here. Instead we get a deeper glimpse at golacric society than we do in the equivalent main book and a part of society that we never get from the main series.

The main charecter is relatable and fallible, a great combination of course. We get to see him broke and how he holds the pieces together.

More in spoilers, TTYL!

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Good but has a big sample at the end so he warned…

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Reviewed: 10-01-21


This book is funny to me because the author has taken it to really subvert the genera a bit with his books. Just like he did with Cat Core, the author decided to have an elderly charecter in the main focus for this book, in this case a slightly more familier charecter: combat veteran.

If I’m not mistaken this is one of the early examples of this and it feels saturated now but wasn’t then. I’ll be honest, I havnt done any of the other vet books, so this is a good change of pace for me regardless.

Characterization here is the name of the game with the plot being important only in the game sense, rather than being the focus of the series, it’s just a distraction. No world shattering plots yet, which is nice.

There’s a lot of stuff here that reminds me of one of the two series I’m working on, the more intense litrpg one rather than the core one. I really love the dynamic skills and classes as well as the characterization… I have plans.

This game, and thus the book, contains regular adventure fare but also exciting stuff like town building and mass combat which makes it more unique from a outside prospective. Gotta love those unique classes!

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Too absorbed

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Reviewed: 09-16-21

I will admit I've been a little bit off on this one, I normally take notes and things but this time I was too deep into the story for most of it, and too distracted the rest of the time. You could say that this is a good thing, the book is after all interesting enough to distract me from everything, including school and trying to explore itself.
Whatever you think I was really happy with this book. Continuing from the last one, this book too balances between world building in preparation for Completionist Chronicles and the character development of these characters from AA and DD. This progression is bountiful and it really helps to set up why the world of CC is the way it is.
I'm always fascinated when I read these books, especially when it comes to the books of long running franchises like this one. I know some people might argue against the word, but the Divine Dungeon Universe is a franchise, as is Veridian Gate Online. These series and their universes are coming to be the kind of scope you only get in those big projects, like Marvel or DC.
Honestly the only universe that I've seen with the kind of scope these books have that isn't a part of a massive franchise is the Fallout Equestria universe. At some point I intend to explain to you all more about that universe because it does exist within Gamelit, but those fan-fiction stories are the only thing I've seen able to match the universality of these books, which I think is a compliment on the DDU and VGO worlds.
I can't say too much of this book except that it's more of the same, and shows off a bunch of stuff from all across the universe. This book just keeps going, and I expect the next two to as well, getting closer and closer to that CC point. Of course, there is the possibility it will overlap with CC before the end, so I guess I'll just have to see soon.

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New focus of the plot

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Reviewed: 09-16-21

This book returns to the main focus of the story being cusrecterization and world building while the plot is secondary to it. While this has a new prospective from the previous books, the shift is smooth and the new positions of the charecters makes sense from where they were before.
I’ve said in the past, I love characterization, but I also don’t find it easy. My brain is burdened with real world people so I have trouble relating my experiances to written text without things feeling rhote. I am so great full for those who find this to be one of their strengths, such as the author of this series.
I’m happy when plot doesn’t take too much of a focus, frankly. I don’t know how to explain it, but plot often feels… forced to me. Sure, I like the climaxes of the story and they should be plot related, but I prefer the interem to feel… well. Slice of life.
In any case I can’t say much out of spoilers but this book really helps to shift the focus from looking back to looking forward in the universe, and to being tied closer to CC then DD.

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Turning Point

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Reviewed: 09-16-21

Frankly, this book is going to be difficult to talk about. Unlike the previous 3 books, this book intersects with almost all the other series in small ways, and as such contains massive spoilers for everything else.
What I can say is that this story is the most plot focused of the AA books, feeling more like a DD book. More on why that is in the spoilers section, but it should be obvious.
The charecters are still good, their just not as well developed in this book as the earlier three, instead drawing on the previous books and just continuing what already existed.
This is the point when the naming conventions of the books change and, well, I can understand why. This book is the ending point of what I’d call the first arc of the AA series. If I was being conservative, I’d say the next four books are basicaly a different series at this point.
This book drives home what leads to the future we see in later series, and I’m going to be happy to talk about how in spoilers.

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Reviewed: 09-16-21

Anyway, this was again a really good book that managed to build its long and world-spanning plot out of characterization. The MC and his anterage are exceedingly well covered, and this is still one of the best series for charecters I’ve seen.
There is some passing between charecters so that we, as the audience, arnt lost. As such there can be some confusion, but for me this was completely mitagated by the story and the way it presented everything, I was able to flow very well between charecters. This has been happening in each book but I didn’t think about it until just now when I almost wrote that it didn’t happen, it was so unnoticed.
These books are like popcorn. Their short and to the point (shorter for me because of the speed I listen) and they are really great going down. Every bite is a step towards addiction. I really recomend this series, and while I’m having fun backfilling with knowledge from Divine Dungeon I’d actualt recomend reading them simultaneously so that you get the prerequsitie stuff from DD while allowing the story here to happen before it’s effects on the other story.
If I do decide to take a break in the middle of Archives it will be after the next book, in the middle of the series conveniently the books I’m waiting on come out on audible late tommarow evening. We’ll see. If not, I’ll just have to step back and do them after I finish.

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Great progression from book 1z

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Reviewed: 09-16-21

Like the first book there is a vary strong plot centered core to this book, well two, but they are directly feeding into the wonderful characters who take center stage for the whole book. This is one of my favorite series for characterization in the genera.
Like the other DDU series this book is full of references, but the references feel… less out of place. I’m not sure if it’s because their more subtle, because the main charecter is so silly, or simply because I’ve gotten used to it but I’ve felt a lot less like I want to comment on them and a lot more that I want to comment on the charecters.
I can’t wait to read the next book, in fact I’m going to start listening to it in just a few minutes when I’m done writing this. This series is very refreshing and I’m hoping that I won’t get any fetigue before the end. If I do, I suppose I can always listen to a book in the middle. After all, I do have my literary plan.
DDU series are more numeras then VGO series, or at least it feels that way. I’m not sure weather sheer numbers agree. It’s just that these series are far more long winded than the short and new VGO book lines.

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