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This was exactly what I expected

Reviewed: 11-16-24

Great story building to greater heights of the next book related to yip of yore the author also teaches you a little more about the primal hunter books universe nothing too plot related really happens here but the build up and some subtle hints about a bigger plot development later still good hope the wait for next book isn’t too long

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Exactly what you would expect

Reviewed: 01-14-23

The story is a harem the story is fast paced and could use more character development and story progression.

The sex parts are short but frequent the mc is very confident and doesn’t spend too much time on self doubt and pity.
This story big sell is that it is exactly what you expect erotic fantasy with bit of plot and some potential for a better story.

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I really like time travel stories but, some spoilers nothing specific

Reviewed: 12-03-22

This one was difficult to listen to I barely finished the first book hoping that the author would smooth out the story and lose some of the emotional gloomy self torturing MC but ya no book two is just as bad if not worse because it had more potential the plot feels forced and rushed the MC takes no joy in his time traveling ability and never seems to realize it’s potential.

The stories not all bad it has good structure the author does a good job with external pressure and magic system design for the story the realistic emotions and seriousness are well done they just don’t fit well with this kind of premise at least for me time travel shouldn’t be this dark and doom and gloom the MC always behaving like he doesn’t have time I also think the author sort of screwed his own story took the main point of the story then broke it with a plot twist

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Excellent story almost perfect

Reviewed: 11-25-22

Every one likes different things I like lit rpg so for me the rpg element is so light as to be fundamentally pointless I would almost rather they not used them, the organic way the author displays MC’s growth is good enough anyway that is unless the humans are going to introduce stat viewing items to the Main characters it doesn’t really matter.
All that said this is a good story mc doesn’t really make too many bad choices and when he does they are usually a learning experience MC is like able though he does come across as kind of manic at times worth a credit to find out if it’s for you

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Great story

Reviewed: 05-19-22

I have listened to this book multiple time over the last few years it’s an amazing story light game mechanics interesting world even the background characters have personality
Small spoiler: in this book main characters split up at the end not by there own choice/ next book spoiler they do reunite busters that book leaves you wanting more at the end too

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Basic story

Reviewed: 02-11-22

Not good nothing too bad either it almost feels like this isn’t a full book but half of one, not overly powerful character biggest plus character motivation seems realistic down side no moments in this story do I really feel connected with MC.I give it this rating cause it has potential especially if author is willing to write longer works this was way too short for the amount of time spent building up to so little action

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Good story but very emotional

Reviewed: 02-02-22

This story is good but it’s very frustrating the MC is an angry almost suicidal guy who seams in capable of pursuing a relationship or controlling his own emotions except to repress them till they blow up in the worst way many of his biggest problems are self created if you decide to listen to this story I recommend doing so in parts

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Good story but very emotional

Reviewed: 02-02-22

This story is good but it’s very frustrating the MC is an angry almost suicidal guy who seams in capable of pursuing a relationship or controlling his own emotions except to repress them till they blow up in the worst way many of his biggest problems are self created if you decide to listen to this story I recommend doing so in parts

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Solid story interesting MC

Reviewed: 01-14-22

The story focuses on MC, author tends to fast forward time in story MC gets more powerful only to find out there is always a bigger fish so to speak. Good story descriptive details about powers and settings help to carry the somewhat overdrawn plot.

Only two real down sides to story one main character is a bit of a scaredy-cat even when the story would make more sense if he wasn’t two main character spends a lot of time in his own head not always a bad thing but it gets old towards the last five or so hours I recommend listening to this over a week instead of the 2 days I did it in

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Not what you expect

Reviewed: 12-29-21

This story doesn’t continue where it left off, halfway through and Jason is still on earth its good world building but also feels like this should be a side story or separate series in all it shouldn’t be book 4 in essentially the loss of stars is cause this whole book so far and probably till the end is either filler or a complete change of direction for story I’m going to pause till book 5 if it continues like this then I might be done with this series

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