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If you like Lit RPG, then you'll like this one.

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-14-24

Entertaining from begining to end. Food character development, and decently written. Already bought the 2nd one.

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Not nearly as good as the first two.

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2 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-11-24

This was the weakest of the three books. Just trying to hard to match the dynamics of the first 2 books. The characters were less interesting, the plot was very obvious, and the writing was sub par. My recommendation is to skip this one. after the first two amazing books, this will leave you feeling disappointed.

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It's an updated version of Sliders... it's good!

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-09-23

This has a very Sliders vibe to it and it's done well. entertaining and the start to a lot of possibilities for a series.

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Best one so far!

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-07-23

Had all the action and growth you could ask for. It kept me wanting to hear more. Hope there is another one.

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So very predictable. Same tropes, nothing new.

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-22-22

As soon as they mentioned the main issue, everything was just predictable and a bit trite. There was a lot of potential for this story, but the author decided to play it safe and ended up with a disappointing whole.

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Just meh...

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1 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-19-22

So nobody knows where the person he's looking lives... but he finds them in less than 3 hours. Just a weak story overall.

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This was two stories, both told horribly.

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1 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-13-22

First off, there was SO much emphasis placed in the main character's sexually, it started to detract from the story. I'm not adverse to character development, but when it just goes off on a tangent and the main character becomes almost 2 dimensional because of it, it's a little sad. Maybe it was because it was written by a man, but from the perspective of a woman... but there seemed to be a dissociation of character.

You begin to dislike the character, because she's not a person, she's just a self-centered character that is not working for the greater good, any more than any celebrity shill.

By the end of the book, the main character was the least interesting aspect. I expected so much more.

The other thing is the naive way the author portrayed government actions. It just made the whole book seem like a bad YA book... and I like YA books.

Overall, I would say it has missed its mark, and I would not recommend it to anyone.

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Irritating characters and a sloppy magic system.

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-07-21

Wanted to like this, but struggled to finish it. The characters are very two dimensional, and the "magic" system makes zero sense. It was very predictable.

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Entertaining and fun

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-26-21

Great LitRPG, good character building and funny NPCs. I loved Frank, and the overall story was entertaining.

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Dissatisfied and irritated

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 04-03-21

This is the second book in the series and I STILL have NO idea what's going on. The cutaway scenes are just confusing. The character building it tedious and I'm glad this series is free, or I would be returning it. There is a confusing magic system, and and I'm just not sure what the point of the book is. Sorry, this is just not for me.

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