
Breach of Peace
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Narrated by:
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Kate Reading
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Michael Kramer
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By:
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Daniel B. Greene
An imperial family is found butchered. Officers of God are called to investigate. Evidence points to a rebel group trying to seed fear into the very heart of the empire itself.
Inspector Khlid takes the case and begins a harrowing hunt for those responsible. But when a larger conspiracy comes to light, will Inspector Khlid be able to trust those working within her own precinct?
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Not bad 👍
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Unexpectedly Amazing
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Very good first jump into a new world
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Enthralling!
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Good characters and plot. I could have used more world building. Usually I really appreciate novellas, but I think this story would have benefited from a little more detail along the way, and I feel left with a ton of questions. Some of this is international from a plot standpoint, but some of it felt constrained by the length of the work.
Great first book
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Well written but quite gruesome
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+The writing style is descriptive without being redundant. I'm aweful at proes and give Daniel full respect for what he accomplished here with tone and text.
+A married couple. How many characters do we meet with comple lives in fantasy these days? I can't recall any others in mainstream fantasy that feel real, wholesome and flawed at the same time
+An individual on the spectrum. As a husband and father to people on the Spectrum, thank you for actually showing a better picture of their mind versus what others see.
+The narration. I do not know what you sacrificed to earn these two, but well done. Its obvious there was good team communication because they add inflection to the dialogue that benefit the story and character development.
Negatives:
- The most interesting fantasy world you will know nothing about. It obvious there's a Bible about this world and I HOPE it gets explored.
- A mystery that is too good to be this rushed. First we have a murder, then a monster, then a state conspiracy. All of these aspects were interesting but their greatness is denied by this break neck pace. Ya went from Holmes to Orwell in less than four chapters man!
- Character names. Did you attend the Forgotten relams school of naming people? I know this is petty but I swear even the narrators stumbled on them a few times
-A god (demi) among men. If a demi God of the Empire is going to be your third act monster, we should have a clue about the religion and structure in the first place. I call this the Sunshine problem.
Thoughts:
Forgive me Goblin King, for I shall sin. This book, if viewed as a multi hour proluoge, is downright awesome. This book as viewed as a novel fails to accomplish the best parts of a fantasy story: Worldbuilding and hero's journey, and satisfying conclusion (not to say a happy conclusion). I do have high hopes for what is to come.
This story falls into a trap that often haunts critics seeking to create. It presents elements of a fantastic world that gives me pleasant memories of Mistborn and Dresden. Yet what do all the critics say about Sanderson and Butcher? They go on too much with world building. The dirty trick of it is that we need to get familiar with the world in the first book. The world is not just a setting, its an active living character. Or at least it should be. Here it acts like a slate template. How does the 7th precinct cover from a nobel mansion to the docks? Was the Mansion in town?
At one point the captain invited the main character to return to first grade for a history lesson. My honest to god thought was 'Can we please?' Because if there were demons less than 100 years ago and then they 'died,' I would very much like to know more! Let alone when a Demi God actually stomps in during act 3, and we go from 'oh the church and God are important,' to 'What the @#$% is God?'
There are great building blocks for a story, but the architecture here is a jenga tower constructed by caffeine riddled children. I have high hopes but book 2 needs to flesh this world out.
An interesting world left underfilled
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Great debut from Daniel Greene!
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The narrators are likely familiar to anyone who is familiar with fantasy novels. As always they both do an excellent job and I am always grateful to see both a male and a female narrator for varying points of view.
A Good Start
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brutal. intriguing. thrilling. action packed. lots of supernatural and even steam punky goodness.
Amazing. fFavorite YouTube and great first outing.
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