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Pedro Urvi
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What would you do if the Gods kidnapped your sister and you are their Slave-Hunter?
In a dystopic world, the Senoca, the People of the Sea have been enslaved by the Golden Gods. They live within the limits of the Boundary, for only one purpose: Produce for the Gods or die. Kyra, a 17-year-old girl, is selected, along with other young girls, and taken to the Gods. Her brother, Ikai, will move heaven and earth to find her. They will fight for survival, confronting a society constituted to serve the masters, and even the Gods themselves in their eternal dwelling.
A story of love, survival, sacrifice, and the fight for freedom.
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- Anonymous User
- 04-27-24
good story
I enjoyed the story line it was a good start, to some thing I well continue with
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- K. Williams
- 01-26-24
Although a good story, horrible writing
It sounded like a first draft in need of SOoooo many edits. I liked the idea of the story, but couldn’t wait for it to end. The performance would have been good if the writing had been good AND the pauses were in the right place. Wrong pausing changes the meaning. Was it self published? Because it’s hard to believe a publisher would have accepted it as is. Because of these things I will not be reading the other books
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