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Tom Larcombe
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Marc is all too aware that the end of the acclimatization year the System has provided to Earth is quickly drawing to a close and that others will be allowed onto the planet to start claiming areas shortly. Zeus has promised that his series of quests will get Marc, at least, to the maximum level reachable in that first year, but Marc is nervous that it isn't going to happen.
With the transformation of his Safe Zone network into a Kingdom, Marc finds more responsibilities, Fortunately for him, even the help files on the Kingdom recommend delegating authority and, as a result, Sean finds himself with more work than ever. The transformation to a Kingdom also gives Marc some new options. Now he can convert dungeons he completes into Training Dungeons, designed to be more survivable, although giving fewer benefits in the process of completing them. He can also create Training Dungeons from dungeon cores that he has claimed, giving him lots of options to build a strong defensive force for the Kingdom.
With a little bit of abuse of the System's rules, Marc's Kingdom makes it into the Space Age, allowing them to accept Zeus' final quest. A visit to a secret base on the moon gives them the final thing needed for Zeus and Hera to launch their attack on the System in their endeavor to replace it with their own 'kinder, gentler' version.
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Power
- Wormhole Mana, Book 1
- By: Tom Larcombe
- Narrated by: Shawn Compton
- Length: 17 hrs and 9 mins
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Maxwell Carter works a maintenance job at a government research facility. The research lab he works at has an accident, more energy coming through the wormhole than anticipated, enough to completely rupture the shields that were supposed to contain it until they finished determining how to convert the energy into electricity. Previously harmless animals are changed to nightmare threats and people are dying, seemingly due to incidents related directly to their interests.
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Good but slow
- By Randy Smith on 11-17-24
By: Tom Larcombe
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The Primal Hunter
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Zogarth
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 20 hrs and 9 mins
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It was a day like any other when suddenly the world changed. The universe reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A place where power is the only thing anyone can truly rely on.
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Don't listen to the other reviews
- By Wesley Naval on 09-12-22
By: Zogarth
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Physics of the Apocalypse 1
- Physics of the Apocalypse, Book 1
- By: Dimitrios Gkirgkiris
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 28 hrs and 28 mins
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Leading astrophysicist Liam Jackson is participating in a scientist exchange program in Germany when a curveball of universal proportions is thrown at him. Planes fall from the sky, cars explode, and strange particles rain down from the heavens as monsters appear out of thin air. The laws of physics have changed in the world. The fundamental forces of the universe are behaving differently, and Liam needs to understand them if he wants to survive.
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Meh... falls prey to the foibles of a mediocre intelligence trying to portray a superhuman one.
- By Amazon Customer on 11-25-23
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Trojan Nightmare
- A LitRPG Cultivation Series
- By: Blaise Corvin
- Narrated by: Luke Daniels
- Length: 13 hrs and 49 mins
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A tragic event called Violet Rain, or Purple Rain led to billions of deaths, civilization collapsing, and monsters roaming the planet. The danger of myths, legends, monsters, and portals to other worlds appearing on Earth has resulted in a surge of magical understanding and technological advancement.
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An awesome new direction for Blaise Corvin’s writing.
- By Christopher on 03-17-22
By: Blaise Corvin
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Forge Master
- A LitRPG Adventure (The Tower Series, Book 1)
- By: Seth Ring
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 14 hrs and 38 mins
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Ascending should have been the easy part. But after being thrown into the void, Thorn finds himself stranded in a strange world filled with even stranger creatures. Together with his cute battle pet, the mysterious god beast Hati, and a sentient AI named Eve, Thorn must forge a place for himself in this new world. Unfortunately, the local guilds all have other ideas, and soon the Titan finds himself embroiled in plots that even his famed strength cannot help him with.
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NOT THE FIRST BOOK
- By Executar on 03-13-23
By: Seth Ring
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Enter System
- Natural Laws Apocalypse Series, Book 1
- By: Tom Larcombe
- Narrated by: Derek Shoales
- Length: 12 hrs and 59 mins
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Marc's home from college on break, spending his time laughing about some of the crazy news stories he's found online, and gaming. When a message appears in his line of sight, blocking out absolutely everything else, he nearly freaks out. The message warns that the world has been in a variant Natural Laws beta test for millennia and that it's about to revert to the norms.
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Awkward. Painful. A choir.
- By Joseph on 02-10-22
By: Tom Larcombe
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Power
- Wormhole Mana, Book 1
- By: Tom Larcombe
- Narrated by: Shawn Compton
- Length: 17 hrs and 9 mins
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Maxwell Carter works a maintenance job at a government research facility. The research lab he works at has an accident, more energy coming through the wormhole than anticipated, enough to completely rupture the shields that were supposed to contain it until they finished determining how to convert the energy into electricity. Previously harmless animals are changed to nightmare threats and people are dying, seemingly due to incidents related directly to their interests.
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Good but slow
- By Randy Smith on 11-17-24
By: Tom Larcombe
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The Primal Hunter
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Zogarth
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 20 hrs and 9 mins
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It was a day like any other when suddenly the world changed. The universe reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A place where power is the only thing anyone can truly rely on.
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Don't listen to the other reviews
- By Wesley Naval on 09-12-22
By: Zogarth
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Physics of the Apocalypse 1
- Physics of the Apocalypse, Book 1
- By: Dimitrios Gkirgkiris
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 28 hrs and 28 mins
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Leading astrophysicist Liam Jackson is participating in a scientist exchange program in Germany when a curveball of universal proportions is thrown at him. Planes fall from the sky, cars explode, and strange particles rain down from the heavens as monsters appear out of thin air. The laws of physics have changed in the world. The fundamental forces of the universe are behaving differently, and Liam needs to understand them if he wants to survive.
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Meh... falls prey to the foibles of a mediocre intelligence trying to portray a superhuman one.
- By Amazon Customer on 11-25-23
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Trojan Nightmare
- A LitRPG Cultivation Series
- By: Blaise Corvin
- Narrated by: Luke Daniels
- Length: 13 hrs and 49 mins
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A tragic event called Violet Rain, or Purple Rain led to billions of deaths, civilization collapsing, and monsters roaming the planet. The danger of myths, legends, monsters, and portals to other worlds appearing on Earth has resulted in a surge of magical understanding and technological advancement.
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An awesome new direction for Blaise Corvin’s writing.
- By Christopher on 03-17-22
By: Blaise Corvin
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Forge Master
- A LitRPG Adventure (The Tower Series, Book 1)
- By: Seth Ring
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 14 hrs and 38 mins
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Ascending should have been the easy part. But after being thrown into the void, Thorn finds himself stranded in a strange world filled with even stranger creatures. Together with his cute battle pet, the mysterious god beast Hati, and a sentient AI named Eve, Thorn must forge a place for himself in this new world. Unfortunately, the local guilds all have other ideas, and soon the Titan finds himself embroiled in plots that even his famed strength cannot help him with.
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NOT THE FIRST BOOK
- By Executar on 03-13-23
By: Seth Ring
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Rise to Omniscience Books 1-5: Pinnacle Kings Arc
- Rise to Omniscience Box Set, Book 1
- By: Aaron Oster
- Narrated by: Doug Tisdale Jr.
- Length: 65 hrs and 1 min
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Morgan's life is not easy. Growing up on the streets of City Four, he is constantly shunned by the other citizens. Morgan doesn't mind being ignored. What he does mind, though, are the constant beatings from the city guards due to his friendship with Sarah, the city lord's only daughter. Lord Simon wants him dead, but the laws of the kingdom are on Morgan’s side, and even the guards won't kill him just for being seen near his manor. Morgan’s time is running out, though. Lord Simon has deep pockets, and his last visit to the manor may just have put him over the edge.
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Extremely Weak
- By BeauFLA on 08-19-22
By: Aaron Oster
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Cherno Caster
- A Cyberpunk LitRPG
- By: Akaso
- Narrated by: Kelley Hazen
- Length: 12 hrs and 14 mins
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Murdered for daring to expose the deeds of the corrupt, Brunhilde Krahe is then snatched from the void of death by the capricious hand of cosmic coincidence. She finds herself reborn into a bizarre world of magic and conspiracy, eldritch knowledge in her brain and cosmic fire burning inside. Krahe copes with her own death the only way she knows how: by continuing her work in the new world. Ruthless mafiosos, unscrupulous politicians, even lowly gangsters—there is more than enough work to be found for an investigator with no qualms towards hyper-violence.
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Great intro for me to LitRPG!
- By Miesha34 on 09-03-24
By: Akaso
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Domestication
- A Fantasy LitRPG Adventure (Battle Mage Farmer, Book 1)
- By: Seth Ring
- Narrated by: Michael Kramer
- Length: 12 hrs and 1 min
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A world on the precipice of the apocalypse. A secret forged in the flames of war. A chance to start over. For John Sutton, only one of those three things matters. Retired from a decade of brutal war, he wants nothing more than a quiet pastoral life while he does his best to stem the steady increase of his Doom Points before they hit 100, signaling the start of the end. He’s been given a small farm on the outskirts of the empire as thanks for his service, but no matter how far he travels, it's impossible to escape the war's devastating effects on the world.
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Worthwhile MC
- By Anonymous User on 06-24-22
By: Seth Ring
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Vigil's Justice
- Vigil Bound, Book 1
- By: James A. Hunter
- Narrated by: Luke Daniels
- Length: 13 hrs and 27 mins
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Boyd Knight found his calling when he joined the Marines and qualified for the elite Force Recon. He'd found a tribe and a family, so when a hand grenade landed near his team, he jumped on it without thought or regret. But instead of winding up dead, he wakes up butt-naked in a cave full of monsters with a knife in one hand and a pistol in the other. He's been chosen by Raguel, the Five-Faced God of Justice, and entrusted with the power of the Vigil Bound.
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What a letdown, Return!
- By Marlon on 09-23-22
By: James A. Hunter
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Sponsored Apocalypse
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Blaise Corvin
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 10 hrs and 56 mins
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Miles “Shrug” Lindstrom received a quest years ago. He was the only person who could see the window, and in addition to the quest, he could also see a countdown to the end of the world. Part of him was hoping that he was just insane and had been hallucinating when he first started seeing the window. Then again, if the quest was just his imagination, he was going to be massively in debt with a rental full of useless junk. But when the countdown finally stops, what happens is nothing like he could have imagined.
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Enjoyable, and engaging, although…
- By Christopher on 05-26-24
By: Blaise Corvin
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The Mayor of Noobtown
- By: Ryan Rimmel
- Narrated by: Johnathan McClain
- Length: 9 hrs and 3 mins
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After dying and being reborn into a world that's built like a video game, Jim has found himself stuck in a very old-world style new-player zone for low-level adventurers. Unfortunately, the zone fell out of use centuries ago, and no one told the monsters they were supposed to take it easy on the Noobs. Even worse, the only new player around is Jim. Jim has been given an opportunity, and he'll do his best to take advantage of it.
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Like the land but actually finishes story lines.
- By Kaz on 09-03-19
By: Ryan Rimmel
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Wish Upon the Stars 1
- A Superhero Cultivation LitRPG
- By: Malcolm Tent
- Narrated by: Neil Hellegers
- Length: 8 hrs and 57 mins
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The Wish Curse Palace, the largest criminal organization in the multiverse, seeks its new successor. On Shane's eighteenth birthday, his dormant Wishmaster bloodline awakens, making him a potential heir to the organization's legacy. In Unity territory, power and public perception go hand-in-hand, empowering an elite class of superheroes and supervillains. Shane must progress through the ranks of heroes to harness his wish-granting abilities. With the help of newfound allies, Shane must showcase acts of heroism to climb the hierarchy, all while concealing the true source of his powers.
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5 stars
- By Joshua Airington on 08-09-23
By: Malcolm Tent
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Restart Again
- Restart Again, Book 1
- By: Adam Ladner
- Narrated by: Alex Knox
- Length: 8 hrs and 38 mins
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All of the stories you've heard are wrong. They always tell you that starting a new life in a fantasy world is an amazing experience, full of magic, adventure, and true love...but they never tell you what happens when it's over. They don't tell you that it just happens again. And again. By the time you start your third new life in a row, all of that initial amazement wears off. That's where Lux finds himself now: dropped into yet another fantasy world, forced to restart his life all over again. He wants nothing more than to disappear...but it seems the world has other plans for him.
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This book is below average
- By Anonymous on 09-30-20
By: Adam Ladner
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Farmer
- Light Online Series, Book 1
- By: Tom Larcombe
- Narrated by: Derek Shoales
- Length: 10 hrs and 23 mins
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Eddie Hunter is about at the end of his rope, so when he stumbles across an ad looking for people to farm in Long Term Immersion in the game Light Online, he can't believe his luck. Once hired he enters the game as soon as he can. Unbeknownst to him, though, the person that hired him is also doing illicit research on the pods that he and the other farmers are using.
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Mediocre
- By Adam Skinner on 07-17-21
By: Tom Larcombe
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Left Out by the System
- Lonely Apocalypse, Book 1
- By: Constantin Step
- Narrated by: Greg D. Barnett
- Length: 8 hrs and 6 mins
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Last I remember I was saving my high school crush from the path of an oncoming truck. Now I'm a skin-and-bones weakling wearing nothing but my hospital gown. Oh yeah, the world is also full of monsters, and I'm the only human left. It turns out a godlike System evacuated humanity but decided to leave the vegetable in the bed. I could crawl into a corner and wait to get eaten by a kobold, but after years of being asleep, I have a new appreciation for feeling alive. I'll have to find the tenacity to survive, the courage to fight, and the strength to face some dark truths about myself.
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Review Is For Book 1&2 After finishing both.
- By Jakeel Campbell on 05-10-22
By: Constantin Step
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Arcane Veterinarian
- A Cozy Fantasy LitRPG Series
- By: Michael James Ploof
- Narrated by: Nathan Agin
- Length: 13 hrs and 51 mins
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After passing his veterinary exam, Ethan is whisked away to an alternate medieval Earth by a sorcerer in need of a veterinarian. He soon comes in possession of Dali, an arcane intelligence of untold power whose sole purpose is to help its master become the greatest at whichever magical path they choose. Naturally, Ethan chooses to become the greatest arcane veterinarian in the world!
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A 5 star fantasy/LitRPG read
- By Roger Fauble on 01-30-25
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Enemy of the World
- Main Character Hides His Strength, Book 1
- By: Road Warrior, OppaTranslations - Translator
- Narrated by: Nick Podehl
- Length: 13 hrs and 46 mins
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Those in power do not believe in the possibility of triumph against the will of the gods, and instead squander their time and effort in indulging their needs and desires as the world quickly rots away around them. Mankind’s only hope rests on the shoulders of a man they hate the most. A man who has taken every possible measure, both accepted and forbidden, to attain power. Sungchul Kim, the man who reached the pinnacle of strength, now stands alone against the Calamities. Not because he is a hero, but because of a promise.
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It was alright...
- By Christopher on 03-06-21
By: Road Warrior, and others
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- EskimoMonkey
- 05-25-24
Definitely a series worth listening/reading. Loved the progression throughout.
The progression towards the end is great, found myself laughing at Mark's plights and Jeff's antics yet again. Sad this is the final book. Would love to see the story carried on either 5 or 10 years after the events of the end of the book. Finally an explanation for the source of the system and it's very satisfying.
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- Anonymous User
- 02-23-24
Great series
Really enjoyed this series. Like the magic system and story lines. One complaint is Felica.
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- Dane H.
- 06-17-24
Series End....and I Find Myself Sad to Let it Go
First, let me just say, I completely recognize that this story and book series will definitely not be everyone's cup of tea. But I ended up really enjoying it for what it was and was sad that it came to an end, and rather abruptly unfortunately. I half wondered if the author had just become burned out on this world and these characters and was ready to move on to something new.
The entire series is a progression-based storyline, though maybe "storyline" is too strong a description. Essentially, everything is about the characters and their safe zone finding ways to level up over and over and over and over, until the 1-year anniversary is reached of the System taking over the world, at which time aliens will be allowed to come to Earth and create havoc. All the leveling up comes in sometimes interesting ways, and sometimes not. If that's not for you, then perhaps consider skipping the series.
I'm not a gamer, so I found myself thinking all of the widely varying stats for each character (and place and weapon and ability) was really clever. The author clearly knows his gaming stuff and wrung out every bit of that knowledge onto the pages.
As a result though, the story (again, if you can call it that) suffered from a lack of connection with regards to outside relationships. For example, the heroes journeyed to a nearby newly discovered safe zone created by a bunch of college folks. A dungeon in that safe zone housed an octopus-person boss in a water world that ended up being friendly (I really enjoyed the uniqueness of this dungeon and boss). Mark (the MC) became good friends with that octopus-boss (Octavius). This was in, what, Book 3 or 4 I think? I kept waiting for Octavius to show up again, but he never did. I wanted the heroes to return to that safe zone to visit with Octavius, perhaps share new things learned with each other after months apart, strengthen each other. I was hoping Octavius would somehow find a way to visit the heroes' safe zone (Anyport). (I didn't quite get the whole Octavius II octopus character, who got placed in a large aquarium and then his growth just....stopped? Like, absolutely nothing new grew with that character. It just became a slightly more sentient animal that the MC occasionally visited in its tank and talked to in order to get stuff off his chest. Why didn't it grow physically and mentally at the same rate as the original Octavius? I mean, cute character I guess, but not sure what the point was.)
For that matter, NO ONE ever visited Anyport, even though it became widely renowned for its size, its heroes, its entertainment, safety, food, transportation, etc. Not even the nearby farmer friends or even the dwarves. Everyone just stuck to their specific zones / houses, which in the end made everyone feel more like NPCs than real people. Along those lines, hardly anyone ever cared or mentioned anything about missing friends and family. That alone should have been a HUGE part of any storyline of an apocalyptic nature.
I wanted continued interactions with all the various creatures and people and places that the heroes came across in their adventuring. The giant crows? They just disappeared the last couple books, but I really enjoyed them and what they might have become and created amongst themselves and with the nearby townsfolks. So many interesting characters and places, but alas, they all tended to be one-and-done.
In this aspect, the extreme "linear-ness" of the story to get from Point A to Point B to Point C without looking back (other than their own Anyport city) was a mild disappointment.
The handful of interesting characters that did recur (e.g. Amy or Reggie or the main Police guy whatshisname) did not really develop, not really. I would have loved delving more into Amy's or Reggie's lives. Perhaps Mark could have taken Amy on a mission to Greece or some such, let that "kid sister" relationship really bloom. Same with Reggie, the boy genius techno-wiz. These cute amusing characters became what amounted to merely features of Anyport - the city's messenger and tech support.
One minor complaint: As a gay fan of the series, I would have loved some gay people / couples at least sprinkled around the various safe zones. There was one instance of a gay guy in Greece that was used as a joke to make Rob (the big strong guy) extremely uncomfortable. That wasn't cool. Anyway, I guess gay people were too stupid or something to survive in this world, oh well.
Still, I did ultimately enjoy the progression nature of the main heroes with their stats and growing abilities. Until the ending.
We spent 8 books waiting with anticipation of reaching the 1-year anniversary and the aliens arriving to take over the world. As Book 8 progressed, I was like...we're running out of time, is there going to be a 9th book, what's going on....
[SPOILERS AHEAD]
Then, with about an hour left, the heroes' time was up and the aliens were allowed onto Earth. WITH ONLY AN HOUR LEFT IN THE AUDIBLE SERIES! Seriously, wtf. There was what felt like a forced duel with an alien, then we immediately skipped ahead 3 years. W.T.F.! No! Everyone's stats had tripled, they were essentially god-lings. There was a sudden confusing battle with another alien kingdom. The End. O.M.G.
Honestly, it was a let-down. While I found myself missing the characters after such an abrupt ending, I felt cheated that I didn't get to experience barely anything of what we spent 8 books anticipating. and whatever journey they ended up taking to get them all to that three-years-later point.
So, Dear Author, I'd buy a sequel series of these characters if you wanted to go back and explore that 3-year period once the aliens were let in and the stakes became real for the heroes with everything they'd built and learned. I'd be here for it. And I'd LOVE a 'Day One' book that showed the chaos that ensued when the first System message came out and then took over everyone's lives. There was merely an off-hand comment or two -- "cars crashed, lots of people died that day". EXPLORE THOSE FIRST FEW DAYS ON A WIDE-SCALE GLOBAL BASIS!
Oh, and finally, I thought the narrator did a great job. Not sure why some reviews called him terrible or flat or whatever. I liked his different voices for the individual characters. No complaints, and certainly did not come across as a "cheap" option for narrating the books.
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- Anonymous User
- 09-04-24
good story
liked this story and the way it ended
unfortunately the guy reading it put me to sleep more often then not .
Just because you can read doesn't mean you should do it out loud ...wich is why I don't attempt it
know your limits .
it's obvious your young and don't take your job performance seriously.
teach maby ? ....I slept thru most of my English classes ...don't deny our future generation that nap time
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- Eric
- 02-21-24
I love it
this is a great story and preformed to perfection. I recommend it completely and hole heartily
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- Matthew Leshchanka
- 03-18-24
A great conclusion to an awesome story
Keeps you at the edge of your seat until the very end. A very satisfying read and ending to a great series.
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- Amazon Customer
- 02-26-24
Great world
Hate the MC, his GF is REALLY lame and I don’t care for the way they treat members of their team… imagine D&D first time paladin (self righteous) who’s also somehow the DM (so it’s his show). Then multiply x2 and add in that the author seems to have had no positive male role models growing up so he has terrible and inane male interactions. The MC is thin skinned and impossible to imagine as any kind of leader. On the technical side the authors use of an internal dialogue (which he then immediately shares out loud… smh) is a very very bad. No one wants to hear a conversation twice and it’s a lazy writing tool. Lastly, the writer needs an editor… there is no reason to “fugue state” twenty times in 6 paragraphs, at some point It can be implied.
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- Phillip H Nguyen
- 03-21-24
Love it
Love the series the story and pace was good but the end was a little rushed as they say bye felicia
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- William Haas
- 03-01-24
A fantastic ride
I wish it kept going. but this seems to be the end if marks story
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- Luke A. Haan
- 06-09-24
I enjoyed the ending of the story
A big thank you to the author for sharing this adventure and bringing this story to its conclusion. It was a wild and fun ride and I enjoyed it. I’m sure you will too.
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