
Dungeon Heart
A LitRPG Adventure (The Singing Mountain, Book 1)
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Henry Kramer
The Emperor of the Forge, Sage of Stones - meaningless titles in the face of death.
After more than 700 years, he was expecting a peaceful and lonely end to his long life. That, however, was not meant to be. A single choice changed his fate, and his soul was forced to live again as a dungeon. Reborn but shackled to the heart of a mountain. This old soul has lost everything - and more.
In a world of gods and demons, there is no room for a weak newborn dungeon. Now with a new name, Smit and his creations will have to carve out their own place. The path may be long and dangerous, but with a soul hardier than stone and a will stronger than iron, will he be able to forge his own destiny?
“Debut author David Sanchez-Ponton knocks it out of the park with a brand-new Dungeon Core Novel that is sure to be up there with the likes of Divine Dungeon, Rogue Dungeon, and Bone Dungeon. Give this one a read - you won't regret it for a second!" (James A. Hunter, best-selling author of Rogue Dungeon, Bibliomancer, and Viridian Gate Online.)
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With a mixed perspective of the core and several human characters (mostly an adventuring group and a select nobles) it provides a solid mix of fantasy and dungeon mechanics. the inclusion of monsters with actual personality makes battles tense with a sense of "who do i want to win?".
A good entry into dungeon core books
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Stilted and awkward
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Great dungeon core book
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It gets slightly awkward when the author describes some of the female characters but doesn't spend enough time on it to become painful. The prose in general is pretty clunky but the world is very mechanical like a video game so it works ok.
It's quite a bit of fun if you like the style but won't give you deep characters or a complicated story. It's all secondary to a fun concept and it does the fun well.
The world literally works like a video game.
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...at every...
...comma...
The writing style isn't the best either, being repetitively overly specific. eg. "The kobold was normal, an average member of the kobold race," which would be fine except for the reader's penchant for long pauses on commas (and even longer between sentences). Like, a whole second of dead air every time. Enough time, sometimes, to repeat everything he just uttered since the last pause.
"The kobold was normal.
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An average kobold."
The word "however" does not a sentence end! Keep talking and let me know what the however is about, don't leave me hanging, man!
It's the kind of thing that'll put you to sleep as your brain tries to predict the next pause.
A good novel... ruined by a reader... who likes...
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Amazing
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Really Fun Book
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but how it was written, on top of the narrator's pacing, makes it apparent that this was not given alot of attention. The writing works when it is describing the settings and functions of the world. But this doesn't work when the actual characters start talking. its all stinted, and sounds like someone who only reads human interations from a textbook. thats not how people talk. like this seem like some one who has written many manuals, textbooks, and instruction pamlets decided to write a story.
And the Narrator makes this even more apparent, as if he too came from a background narrating instructional and HR videos.
overall the story is a great, but needed another writer to give it more life.
the experience is, if "How's It Made", had a narritive story line.
Great Story, but poor execution
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Need to listen
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Best Dungeon Building Story
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