That Wasn't the Plan
The World, Book 6
Failed to add items
Add to Cart failed.
Add to Wish List failed.
Remove from wishlist failed.
Adding to library failed
Follow podcast failed
Unfollow podcast failed
$0.99/mo for the first 3 months
Prime members: New to Audible? Get 2 free audiobooks during trial.
That Wasn't the Plan
Buy for $24.95
No default payment method selected.
We are sorry. We are not allowed to sell this product with the selected payment method
-
Narrated by:
-
Jason Hill
-
By:
-
Jason A. Cheek
About this listen
Hunted at every turn while the Chaos Storm Guild Leader's plans near fruition, Startum Ironwolf and his friends must fight their way through the vanguard of the northern hordes and mass of PKers to reach their friend. On their way, they meet up with new friends and old enemies as the noose slowly closes around them.
Unfortunately, things don’t always go the way you plan.
Warning: This is a GameLit/LitRPG story that contains explicit intimate relations, explicit violence, explicit expletives, cussing and swearing, explicit hacking and slashing, betrayals, pant-wetting, improper use of motorcycles, general speeding, polyamory, theft, arson, egg-laying, open relationships, power leveling, twinking, PVP, ogling of demi-humans, ogling of humanoids, ogling of monsters, PVE, spawn camping, trespassing, dwarf tossing, cell phone hacking, account hacking, attempted rape, adult situations, violations of civilian rights, a dire wolf with an attitude, infidelity, bawdy relations with orcs, goblins, trolls, beastkin, gnomes, dwarves, elves, and monsters, MMORPG-style violence, allusions to nonconsensual relations, consensual relations, wolves and bears as pets, nudity and nakedness, no bras, naked raids, murder, attempted murder, atheism, rationalizations, manhandling, decapitations, pirate-on-pirate violence, gossiping, defenestration, sexual harassment, religious rationalizations, unusual morals, NPC relations, player relations, possible centaur riding, stalking, looting, womanizing, mansplaining, bribery, LAN parties, fantasy depictions of mages and warriors, highly risqué fantasy gaming tropes, personal rants, assault and battery, stabbings, cannibalism, general mayhem, specific mayhem, immolations, explosions, siege weapons of mass destruction, existential discussions, controversial topics of sci-fi fandom, real-world intimate relationships, in-game intimate relationships, playing the field, disrespect for authority, womansplaining, realm invasions, mind control fears, bad tempered marines, conspiracy theories, cohabitation, men playing women, digital prostitution, exsanguinations, women playing men, references to science fiction literature and television, references to gaming, playing MMOs for too many hours straight, government surveillance, jelly donuts, inappropriate gaming names, player abuse, interrogations and torture, chest ogling, grocery store misconduct, talking on a cell in public, relational misconduct, magic misconduct, fangs, general misconduct, voyeurism, making-out sessions, heavy petting, insanity, random violence, promiscuity, werewolves and vampires that like to kill, evil gnolls and goblins, good orcs and bad orcs, too much drinking, dismemberment, abuse of authority, abuse of popularity, electrocutions, freeze blasts, arcane explosions, destruction of property, public indecency, annoying escort quests, rezzing and resurrections, castle sieging, city ransacking, slavery, raping and pillaging, role-playing, abuse, crazy ex-girlfriend flashbacks, nutshots and eye poking, the stabbing of private organs, pick-up groups, fast-moving zombies, hunting for food and xp, excessive violence, bareback riding, troll hating, camping, griefing, obstruction of justice, justified vengeance, biting, backstabbing, clawing, trash-talking, open-minded discussions, bitching, close-minded hate, personal opinions, and anything else offensive I may have forgotten to mention. Listen at your own risk.
©2020 Jason Cheek (P)2020 Jason CheekListeners also enjoyed...
-
First Login
- The World, Book 1
- By: Jason Cheek
- Narrated by: Jason Hill
- Length: 8 hrs and 49 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,742
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 1,604
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,602
Diving into a revolutionary new video game, Jason and his friends are working to move their entire guild to pro-gamer status. Choosing a Nightmare start to get ahead of the wave of new players starting the game, Jason finds himself alone in the wilds tasked with saving a group of refugees from goblin invaders. Although he manages to save the survivors, that is just the beginning of his trials as he desperately fights to bring them back from the edge of annihilation.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
lol
- By Kindle Customer on 03-04-20
By: Jason Cheek
-
Defiance of the Fall
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: TheFirstDefier, JF Brink
- Narrated by: Pavi Proczko
- Length: 23 hrs and 29 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 10,380
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 9,013
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 9,001
Zac was alone in the middle of the forest when the world changed... The whole planet was introduced to the multiverse by an unfeeling System... or God. A universe where an endless number of races and civilizations fought for power and dominion. Zac finds himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts, demons, and worse. Alone, lost and without answers, he must find the means to survive and get stronger in this new cut-throat reality.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Stick with it, you won’t be disappointed
- By Clay on 06-14-21
By: TheFirstDefier, and others
-
The Primal Hunter
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Zogarth
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 20 hrs and 9 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 11,080
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 9,593
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 9,578
It was a day like any other when suddenly the world changed. The universe reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A place where power is the only thing anyone can truly rely on.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Don't listen to the other reviews
- By Wesley Naval on 09-12-22
By: Zogarth
-
Ritualist
- Completionist Chronicles, Book 1
- By: Dakota Krout
- Narrated by: Vikas Adam
- Length: 12 hrs and 6 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 13,854
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 12,699
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 12,677
The decision to start a new life is never an easy one, but for Joe the transition was far from figurative. Becoming a permanent addition to a game world, it doesn't take long to learn that people with his abilities are actively hunted. In fact, if the wrong people gained knowledge of what he was capable of, assassins would appear in droves.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Ritual is necessary for us to know anything
- By LITRPG Audiobook Reviews on 05-18-18
By: Dakota Krout
-
Mark of the Fool
- A Progression Fantasy Epic
- By: J.M. Clarke
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 19 hrs
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 5,918
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 5,041
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 5,041
After his parents died, Alex Roth had one desire: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted into the University of Generasi, the world’s greatest academy of wizardry.... Fate, however, had another plan. On his 18th birthday, he is Marked by prophecy as one of his kingdom’s five Heroes, chosen to fight the Ravener, his land’s great enemy. But his brand is "The Fool". Worst of the marks.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Finally a Mc that’s not dumb or overpowered
- By Anonymous User on 09-22-22
By: J.M. Clarke
-
Dissonance
- A LitRPG Adventure (Unbound Book 1)
- By: Nicoli Gonnella
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 26 hrs and 44 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 4,742
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 4,158
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 4,153
Felix's life on Earth had become a series of dead-end jobs, ruined relationships, and rotating apartments smaller than most postage stamps. By all accounts, even his own, he was a coward. Too afraid to move forward, to take risks. Yet when given the chance to choose between risking his life or walking away from a deadly encounter, he didn't hesitate. Moments before his untimely demise, Felix was snatched from earth and thrust into a magical world known only as "The Continent". Empowered by the "System", he learns that he can strengthen himself through combat and dedication.
-
2 out of 5 stars
-
I don't think my words can do this justice
- By Joseph on 05-09-22
By: Nicoli Gonnella
-
First Login
- The World, Book 1
- By: Jason Cheek
- Narrated by: Jason Hill
- Length: 8 hrs and 49 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,742
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 1,604
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,602
Diving into a revolutionary new video game, Jason and his friends are working to move their entire guild to pro-gamer status. Choosing a Nightmare start to get ahead of the wave of new players starting the game, Jason finds himself alone in the wilds tasked with saving a group of refugees from goblin invaders. Although he manages to save the survivors, that is just the beginning of his trials as he desperately fights to bring them back from the edge of annihilation.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
lol
- By Kindle Customer on 03-04-20
By: Jason Cheek
-
Defiance of the Fall
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: TheFirstDefier, JF Brink
- Narrated by: Pavi Proczko
- Length: 23 hrs and 29 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 10,380
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 9,013
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 9,001
Zac was alone in the middle of the forest when the world changed... The whole planet was introduced to the multiverse by an unfeeling System... or God. A universe where an endless number of races and civilizations fought for power and dominion. Zac finds himself stuck in the wilderness surrounded by deadly beasts, demons, and worse. Alone, lost and without answers, he must find the means to survive and get stronger in this new cut-throat reality.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Stick with it, you won’t be disappointed
- By Clay on 06-14-21
By: TheFirstDefier, and others
-
The Primal Hunter
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Zogarth
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 20 hrs and 9 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 11,080
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 9,593
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 9,578
It was a day like any other when suddenly the world changed. The universe reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A place where power is the only thing anyone can truly rely on.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Don't listen to the other reviews
- By Wesley Naval on 09-12-22
By: Zogarth
-
Ritualist
- Completionist Chronicles, Book 1
- By: Dakota Krout
- Narrated by: Vikas Adam
- Length: 12 hrs and 6 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 13,854
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 12,699
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 12,677
The decision to start a new life is never an easy one, but for Joe the transition was far from figurative. Becoming a permanent addition to a game world, it doesn't take long to learn that people with his abilities are actively hunted. In fact, if the wrong people gained knowledge of what he was capable of, assassins would appear in droves.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Ritual is necessary for us to know anything
- By LITRPG Audiobook Reviews on 05-18-18
By: Dakota Krout
-
Mark of the Fool
- A Progression Fantasy Epic
- By: J.M. Clarke
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 19 hrs
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 5,918
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 5,041
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 5,041
After his parents died, Alex Roth had one desire: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted into the University of Generasi, the world’s greatest academy of wizardry.... Fate, however, had another plan. On his 18th birthday, he is Marked by prophecy as one of his kingdom’s five Heroes, chosen to fight the Ravener, his land’s great enemy. But his brand is "The Fool". Worst of the marks.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Finally a Mc that’s not dumb or overpowered
- By Anonymous User on 09-22-22
By: J.M. Clarke
-
Dissonance
- A LitRPG Adventure (Unbound Book 1)
- By: Nicoli Gonnella
- Narrated by: Travis Baldree
- Length: 26 hrs and 44 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 4,742
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 4,158
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 4,153
Felix's life on Earth had become a series of dead-end jobs, ruined relationships, and rotating apartments smaller than most postage stamps. By all accounts, even his own, he was a coward. Too afraid to move forward, to take risks. Yet when given the chance to choose between risking his life or walking away from a deadly encounter, he didn't hesitate. Moments before his untimely demise, Felix was snatched from earth and thrust into a magical world known only as "The Continent". Empowered by the "System", he learns that he can strengthen himself through combat and dedication.
-
2 out of 5 stars
-
I don't think my words can do this justice
- By Joseph on 05-09-22
By: Nicoli Gonnella
-
System Change: A LitRPG Adventure
- System Universe, Book 1
- By: SunriseCV
- Narrated by: Adam Verner
- Length: 12 hrs and 29 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 2,891
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 2,429
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 2,427
Fight, survive, adapt, and rely only on yourself. That is Derek’s creed and what's got him through the System Integration on Earth. Everything changed when the System came. Cute bunnies and beautiful butterflies became savage killing machines. Then the Invaders arrived with a single goal: to obtain ownership of this new habitable planet. War has raged ever since. None of this mattered much to Derek, aside from making living a little more perilous.
-
1 out of 5 stars
-
Reviews lie hard
- By Anonymous User on 11-27-22
By: SunriseCV
-
Aether's Blessing
- Aether's Revival, Book 1
- By: Daniel Schinhofen
- Narrated by: Andrea Parsneau
- Length: 17 hrs and 59 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,648
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 1,456
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,453
Every year, the empire administers the rite of passage into adulthood. That rite serves to identify those blessed by Aether to become magi. The new magi are shipped to the academy to learn the arts of magic. The academy is a dangerous place; the tournaments held twice each year can cripple or kill the students, and the clans of the empire will go to great lengths to recruit the students they want. Gregory had one dream: to become a magi like the legends of old. Though he was ridiculed by the residents of the village and his unsupportive father, he never wavered from his dream.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
whoa
- By Benjamin on 08-31-20
-
Awaken Online: Catharsis
- By: Travis Bagwell
- Narrated by: David Stifel
- Length: 16 hrs
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 11,919
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 11,014
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 10,987
Jason logs into Awaken Online fed-up with reality. He's in desperate need of an escape, and this game is his ticket to finally feeling the type of power and freedom that are so sorely lacking in his real life. Awaken Online is a brand new virtual reality game that just hit the market, promising an unprecedented level of immersion. Yet Jason quickly finds himself pushed down a path he didn't expect. In this game, he isn't the hero. There are no damsels to save. There are no bad guys to vanquish.
-
2 out of 5 stars
-
WELFARE
- By Jim "The Impatient" on 04-07-17
By: Travis Bagwell
-
He Who Fights with Monsters: A LitRPG Adventure
- He Who Fights with Monsters, Book 1
- By: Shirtaloon, Travis Deverell
- Narrated by: Heath Miller
- Length: 28 hrs and 56 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars 41,277
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 36,951
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 36,869
It’s not easy making the career jump from office-supplies-store middle manager to heroic interdimensional adventurer. At least, Jason tries to be heroic, but it's hard to be good when all your powers are evil. He’ll face off against cannibals, cultists, wizards, monsters...and that’s just on the first day. He’s going to need courage, he’s going to need wit, and he’s going to need some magic powers of his own. But first, he’s going to need pants.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Great!
- By tb3 on 03-10-21
By: Shirtaloon, and others
-
Road to Mastery
- A LitRPG Apocalypse Adventure
- By: Valerios
- Narrated by: Jeremy Frazier
- Length: 30 hrs and 6 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4 out of 5 stars 454
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 372
-
Story4 out of 5 stars 373
Jack Rust was a disillusioned biologist with a PhD—almost. When an extraterrestrial AI calling itself the System invaded Earth and thrusts it into a world of aliens and violence, the least Jack hoped for was gaining access to magic.
-
3 out of 5 stars
-
How smart are you
- By shayne c threlkeld on 05-31-23
By: Valerios
-
The Two Week Curse: A LitRPG Fantasy Series
- The Ten Realms, Book 1
- By: Michael Chatfield
- Narrated by: Neil Hellegers
- Length: 17 hrs and 7 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,661
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 1,450
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,447
Erik West is an ex-combat medic. He and his best friend, marine recon sniper Jimmy "Rugrat" Rodriguez, have been thrown into another world. They've become one of the "cursed". Now they have to figure out this fantasy world, where cultivation, skills, and abilities must be grown...or death awaits.
-
2 out of 5 stars
-
Treading mediocrity.
- By Adam on 02-18-22
-
The Path of Ascension
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: C. Mantis
- Narrated by: J.S. Arquin
- Length: 24 hrs and 3 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,756
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 1,527
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,526
Matt plans to delve the rifts responsible for the monsters that destroyed his city and murdered his parents. But his dreams are crushed when his Tier 1 Talent is rated as detrimental and no guild or group will take him. Working at a nearby inn, he meets a mysterious and powerful couple. They give him a chance to join the Path of Ascension, an empire-wide race to ascend the Tiers and become living legends. With their recommendation and a stolen Skill, Matt begins his journey to the peak of power. Maybe then, he can get vengeance he seeks.
-
3 out of 5 stars
-
New Pet Peeve in an otherwise good story & listen
- By David on 10-05-22
By: C. Mantis
-
Enter System
- Natural Laws Apocalypse Series, Book 1
- By: Tom Larcombe
- Narrated by: Derek Shoales
- Length: 12 hrs and 59 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 850
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 760
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 759
Marc's home from college on break, spending his time laughing about some of the crazy news stories he's found online, and gaming. When a message appears in his line of sight, blocking out absolutely everything else, he nearly freaks out. The message warns that the world has been in a variant Natural Laws beta test for millennia and that it's about to revert to the norms.
-
1 out of 5 stars
-
Awkward. Painful. A choir.
- By Joseph on 02-10-22
By: Tom Larcombe
-
Forge Master
- A LitRPG Adventure (The Tower Series, Book 1)
- By: Seth Ring
- Narrated by: Eric Jason Martin
- Length: 14 hrs and 38 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,182
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 963
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 963
Ascending should have been the easy part. But after being thrown into the void, Thorn finds himself stranded in a strange world filled with even stranger creatures. Together with his cute battle pet, the mysterious god beast Hati, and a sentient AI named Eve, Thorn must forge a place for himself in this new world. Unfortunately, the local guilds all have other ideas, and soon the Titan finds himself embroiled in plots that even his famed strength cannot help him with.
-
3 out of 5 stars
-
NOT THE FIRST BOOK
- By Executar on 03-13-23
By: Seth Ring
-
The New World
- A LitRPG Adventure
- By: Monsoon117
- Narrated by: James Patrick Cronin
- Length: 24 hrs and 21 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4 out of 5 stars 586
-
Performance4.5 out of 5 stars 480
-
Story4 out of 5 stars 478
An AI calling itself Schema has assimilated Earth into its System. As a consequence, everyone gained access to status screens, power-ups, and skills. This AI turned these concepts from fiction to fact. It's easy to become intoxicated with leveling up and becoming stronger. To some, it's too good to be true, like living out a dream. For Daniel, however, it's closer to a nightmare.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
Good Story, Good Narrator
- By David Carsley on 05-10-23
By: Monsoon117
-
The Grand Game, Book 1
- A Solo Adventure in a New World
- By: Tom Elliot
- Narrated by: Andrew Tell
- Length: 15 hrs and 49 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 1,245
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 1,083
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 1,082
Michael finds himself in the realm of the Forever Kingdom, with no memory of how he got there and who he is. Even so, he must participate in the Grand Game and forge a new destiny for himself. Dropped into a dungeon of monsters and strange magics, would you survive in a game where to lose means death? Alone, and with little more than his wits to aid him, Michael must advance as a player, slay his foes, and gain experience. All while navigating the intrigues around him and discovering his purpose.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
What I needed
- By Lionelle on 08-28-21
By: Tom Elliot
-
One More Last Time
- A LitRPG/GameLit Novel (The Good Guys, Book 1)
- By: Eric Ugland
- Narrated by: Neil Hellegers
- Length: 7 hrs and 43 mins
- Unabridged
-
Overall4.5 out of 5 stars 5,408
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars 4,859
-
Story4.5 out of 5 stars 4,847
He thought it was the end, and his gun sat ready to make sure. But an oddball offer from his last friend comes at the literal last second. Curiosity gets the best of him, and he finds himself sucked into iNcarn8, a game claiming to be a whole new life. Now, as Montana, the larger-than-life tank warrior, he has one more last time to get his life right.
-
5 out of 5 stars
-
ignore the short read time
- By Thomas bankston on 07-13-19
By: Eric Ugland
What listeners say about That Wasn't the Plan
Highly rated for:
Reviews - Please select the tabs below to change the source of reviews.
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Amazon Customer
- 11-09-22
Worth Your Credit! Amazing series that develops
Worth Your Credit! Amazing series that develops & grows.
Can't wait for the next. I love the different elements & different combinations of story elements. There is so much cool stuff and ideas of things that I wished mmorpgs had that have be incorporated and integrated. It's all interesting and gives the story so much depth. That's not even getting into the characters and the different personalities.
My 2 minor gripes as a gamer:
1) I wish you wouldn't call MMORPGS morgs. Each word in the acronym is pronounced like the letters in the alphabet. If it's being shortened into morgs for the sake of brevity, then please use gamer speak and just say mmo the rpg isn't needed after the initial saying and is also implied.
2)Also, PK-ers(pronounced P K ers just like letters in the alphabet with the "ers" part on the end) aka player killers. They aren't called pickers...
It'd be amazing (if possible.... hopefully it is) if retroactively wherever those words were said that it could be cut out & spliced in the correct gamer vernacular. That'd be amazing.
I'll happily buy more books from this series as they are available/ or even pre-order.
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Joeseph Baxter
- 02-08-21
great book
great book,
im loving the series, great story, if you enjoy litrpg/gamlit vrmmo books you will love this series
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
1 person found this helpful
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Kindle Customer
- 10-17-20
Stellar Book * Rocket-Star Fun!
I love an author with not just drive, but the organization to be counted upon by his/her reader base. Even if health challenges an outdated method of attack and completion goals; I have faith that with your work ethic (and with your family's "overwatch!"), you'll find a groove of joy, fortification and success ;-))
I truly enjoy a meaty book with invested character and world development. It seems the trend to (and reader reviews for many genres and writing styles are unfortunately pushing more authors to adapt/not apply themselves), in not weaving in settings and the senses. Even the small discussions that make characters "real" and the quirks each have (which you apply without wearing out the horse with copy & paste style), by not needing to only be about the bottom line plot that rushes everything into a skeletal work of lost society; and the true fulfilment of worlds and ideas (not to mention entertaining, engaging, rewarding, enriching and a memorable book for readers!!!).
I bought the series this week because I saw later on that the page count would raise. I liked the flow, and that the game mechanics were not only spot-on and adaptively complex to be interesting; but not an override to the story. In book six, I liked the shorter chapter layout (though I'm not against short chapters and find it's being overused by many), and the lower instance of character sheet interludes. It may have needed one or two more, actually, for those who haven't listened to the whole series straight through. The preface of game days, etc. is a nice touch. You may consider cutting repeats with really short chapters together and with the same people or local. I'd encourage time stamping. Since a book doesn't straddle multitudes of day; perhaps occasional day reminders, with the focus on time and what group, local and/or POV. Super editing bytheway! Hardly anything amiss in the continuity while I listened through your Audible format!
Thank you!
With Regard,
Halli
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
1 person found this helpful
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Robert Linn
- 07-08-23
Great listen
The author is doing a great job. I believe the author is doing a great job of showing how people show how it is in a rpg role game
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Amazon Customer
- 09-11-21
NEED MORE
in under 2 weeks I have finished all 6 books. please please please keep this series going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
1 person found this helpful
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Tory Vander Esch
- 07-29-20
can't get enough
this series is quickly becoming one of my favorites. there is a lot of fighting. the story seems to take of differently then any other I have heard before. leaves me eagerly waiting for the next one
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
1 person found this helpful
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- omar conger
- 10-04-21
Well done
This story has unlimited potential. The author has established a completely unique LitRPG story and its very well written. The narrator is pretty good too. Thus far, each book is healthy in length which gives good lasting listening time - at least for me. For this particular book, it's just less than 3 weeks into the opening off the in-game experience. The virtual game, AI perspective is pretty cool.. The author uses his personal experience from RPG games and other various life experience and has found a way to mix them together. Further this author is an "Indy or Independent" author and has shared that other authors have been rather unfriendly to knew authors in the genre. While I accept this, I dont really understand why other established authors would feel threatened but new authors. I would think that would only drive creative conception to write better or more entertaining stories all the way around. Regardless, I have so far come to really enjoy this particular story, the author hasn't disappointed yet, and with 6 books in, I find it hard to see I'll be disappointed in the future.
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Matthew
- 09-26-21
Great book to loose yourself in
I have to admit I was weary about this book when I first started listening to it but I gave it a try knowing I could return it and I’m glad I did it helps loose yourself in the daily grind at work and I’m always excited to see a new book get released.
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- Michelle Coronado
- 08-31-22
fantastic story
I have been following this story from book one and it only gets better and better. the writing has improved greatly by this book, the engagement has stayed high. I always get to the end of one book and have to get the next PRONTO
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!
-
Overall5 out of 5 stars
-
Performance5 out of 5 stars
-
Story5 out of 5 stars
- josh havner
- 11-30-23
Spectacular
Really great story awesome series. You fall in love with all the characters and adventures. And Jason Hill is the absolute best in the business.
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
You voted on this review!
You reported this review!