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The Heir
- A book based on the characters of Pride and Prejudice.
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 12 hrs and 17 mins
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In this low angst, a sweet retelling of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Mr. Bennet is not just idle, he is actively cruel. And Mrs. Bennet, while still uneducated, must do whatever she can to protect her daughters from their father. Mr. Darcy’s epiphany comes much earlier than in canon and it changes his relationships not only with the Bennets but with his sister, his cousin Anne, and Bingley. When the Bennet matriarch moves to an estate outside of Bath with her daughters, Bingley follows and so do both Darcy siblings.
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Enchanting story
- By Lowcountry girl on 07-16-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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A Fortuitous Wager: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
- By: Kimbelle Pease
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- Length: 8 hrs and 53 mins
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“Happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance.”—Pride and Prejudice, Chapter VI After another disappointing Season fending off matchmaking mamas and grasping debutantes, Fitzwilliam Darcy has given up hope of finding a wife. His business partner, Edward Gardiner, suggests a sojourn into Hertfordshire to escape the machinations of Town—and meddlesome aunts who take every opportunity to help him on the marriage mart. Although asserting his nieces would never be a match for Darcy, Gardiner suggests Jane and Elizabeth Bennet might make pleasant acquaintances while in the ...
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Just okay
- By bebe on 09-09-24
By: Kimbelle Pease
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Misunderstandings
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: AnnaMarie Wallace
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 11 hrs and 21 mins
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An unbelievable thing has just happened at Meryton’s Assembly Ball. A feather worked its way loose from Miss Bingley’s turban, swooping unerringly for Mr. Darcy’s unprotected eye! Instinctively, the gentleman in question raised his hand and stepped backward to avoid the object, tripping Miss Elizabeth Bennet and then falling upon her prone form. Scandalous! A marriage must occur, of course. But he does not want to marry an unknown country miss and she most certainly does not want to marry the proud, dour Mr. Darcy. Can they find their way to one another despite this inauspicious ...
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Great Story Bad AI
- By Amazon Customer on 10-06-24
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Leasing Longbourn
- A Sweet Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Victoria Lynn
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 10 hrs and 8 mins
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What if there were no entail? When Mr. Bennet dies, the Bennet ladies are given a new home at their Uncle Gardiner’s estate, Netherfield Park. When Mr. Bingley looks to lease an estate close to London, Longbourn seems the perfect solution. And he brings with him his best friend Fitzwilliam Darcy, along with Miss Bingley, Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, retired Col. Fitzwilliam, and the longtime mentor of Darcy and Fitzwilliam, Mr. Wickham. Lady Anne Darcy, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, and other family members plot against our favorite couple. Will they succeed in their efforts to compromise Miss Darcy?
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Not a fan or AI narration
- By Angela Campbell on 10-22-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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Summers at Pemberley
- A Pride and Prejudice Retelling
- By: Jennifer Kay
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- Length: 7 hrs and 9 mins
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As a child, Elizabeth Bennet's years were split into two distinct segments: her normal life with four rambunctious sisters in Hertfordshire, and summers in Derbyshire on the estate of her father's friend Mr. Darcy. Summertime meant peaks to explore, horses to ride, a library full of books, and friends unlike anyone she knew at home. It was an idyllic escape - until the year that everything came crashing down and summers at Pemberley became no more than a fading memory. When Fitzwilliam Darcy walks into the Meryton Assembly half a decade later, Elizabeth doesn't know how to reconcile the two...
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No matter how it’s told, the live story of Lizzy and Darcy will always find eachother.
- By Marilynn on 04-20-24
By: Jennifer Kay
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Such Novel Notions
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Eselle Teays
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- Length: 10 hrs and 18 mins
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On seeing Mr. Darcy frowning at this pronouncement, Elizabeth plucked up her courage and continued firmly, “If said woman desires a second proposal, she must disregard the indignity so abhorrent to his feelings and propose herself. Mr. Darcy, will you accept my hand in marriage?” Prologue, Such Novel Notions What has induced Elizabeth Bennet to do something so shocking just three weeks after her vehement and cruel rejection of this same man’s offer of marriage in Hunsford? While she is still reeling from the indisputable truths disclosed in the letter Mr. Darcy handed to her the ...
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Engaging
- By Samantha on 10-16-24
By: Eselle Teays
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Entailed To Heirs Female
- A Sweet Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Victoria Lynn
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 9 hrs and 17 mins
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In this low angst, a sweet retelling of Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Mr. Bennet is not just idle, he is actively cruel. And Mrs. Bennet, while still uneducated, must do whatever she can to protect her daughters from their father. Mr. Darcy’s epiphany comes much earlier than in canon and it changes his relationships not only with the Bennets but with his sister, his cousin Anne, and Bingley. When the Bennet matriarch moves to an estate outside of Bath with her daughters, Bingley follows and so do both Darcy siblings.
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Enchanting story
- By Lowcountry girl on 07-16-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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A Fortuitous Wager: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
- By: Kimbelle Pease
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 8 hrs and 53 mins
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“Happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance.”—Pride and Prejudice, Chapter VI After another disappointing Season fending off matchmaking mamas and grasping debutantes, Fitzwilliam Darcy has given up hope of finding a wife. His business partner, Edward Gardiner, suggests a sojourn into Hertfordshire to escape the machinations of Town—and meddlesome aunts who take every opportunity to help him on the marriage mart. Although asserting his nieces would never be a match for Darcy, Gardiner suggests Jane and Elizabeth Bennet might make pleasant acquaintances while in the ...
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Just okay
- By bebe on 09-09-24
By: Kimbelle Pease
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Misunderstandings
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: AnnaMarie Wallace
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 11 hrs and 21 mins
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An unbelievable thing has just happened at Meryton’s Assembly Ball. A feather worked its way loose from Miss Bingley’s turban, swooping unerringly for Mr. Darcy’s unprotected eye! Instinctively, the gentleman in question raised his hand and stepped backward to avoid the object, tripping Miss Elizabeth Bennet and then falling upon her prone form. Scandalous! A marriage must occur, of course. But he does not want to marry an unknown country miss and she most certainly does not want to marry the proud, dour Mr. Darcy. Can they find their way to one another despite this inauspicious ...
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Great Story Bad AI
- By Amazon Customer on 10-06-24
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Leasing Longbourn
- A Sweet Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Victoria Lynn
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 10 hrs and 8 mins
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What if there were no entail? When Mr. Bennet dies, the Bennet ladies are given a new home at their Uncle Gardiner’s estate, Netherfield Park. When Mr. Bingley looks to lease an estate close to London, Longbourn seems the perfect solution. And he brings with him his best friend Fitzwilliam Darcy, along with Miss Bingley, Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, retired Col. Fitzwilliam, and the longtime mentor of Darcy and Fitzwilliam, Mr. Wickham. Lady Anne Darcy, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, and other family members plot against our favorite couple. Will they succeed in their efforts to compromise Miss Darcy?
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Not a fan or AI narration
- By Angela Campbell on 10-22-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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Pride Under Good Regulation
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Eselle Teays
- Narrated by: Virtual Voice
- Length: 10 hrs and 13 mins
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The Bennet family of Longbourn, Hertfordshire, had long been known to its neighbours as exceptionally learned though eccentric, but was tolerated because the first Bennets settled there more than four hundred years before, just after the great plague. Both the grandfather and father of the master, Mr. Thomas Bennet, married blue-stocking wives from the Continent. These circumstances had a profound effect on Mrs. Bennet and her five daughters. Because of this broader worldview, the Bennet family was more aware of, and affected by some historical events of the period far outside the twenty-...
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VV not too bad and Story is Very Interesting
- By JTG on 09-04-24
By: Eselle Teays
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Something New to Observe A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
- By: Kimbelle Pease
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- Length: 10 hrs and 58 mins
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One warning, two cautions, and a note: WARNING: In deference to a truth universally acknowledged that men do not behave the same when no women are present as they do in mixed company, this vagary does have occasional uses of profanity. The men in my life would consider it amusing but naïve to afford the same semantics of conversation for wholly different circumstances such as these, or they would should one of them choose to read it. This vagary proposes an alternate telling of the original Pride and Prejudice and considers what may have happened should the characters have been afforded a ...
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Why does a story set in Regency England have an American narrator?
- By TM Starr on 06-29-24
By: Kimbelle Pease
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I already knew you!
- A book based on the characters of Pride and Prejudice
- By: Miranda Flan
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- Length: 14 hrs and 10 mins
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Mr. Darcy encounters Elizabeth a year before their meeting at Netherfield. They begin a friendship that very soon develops into a romance. Due to an unexpected circumstance, Mr. Darcy hides his true identity and hopes he'll be able to explain to Elizabeth who he truly is in the future. Sadly, he has an unfortunate accident that makes him lose his memories of that year. When Elizabeth reencounters her love, she realizes he isn't the man she admired and cannot help but feel an intense betrayal. For his part, Mr. Darcy cannot rationalize his attraction towards her, as he is certain that they ...
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Great story
- By Amazon Customer on 09-17-24
By: Miranda Flan
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The Cousin Vol. I
- (You are not Alone) A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Miranda Flan
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The Bennet sisters will see how their lives change thanks to their cousin's return to England and their lives. Johnathan Edward Gardiner returns to England after spending many years apart from his family to further his business. However, when he arrives in England and finds his family, things are not how he expected. Will he be able to confront and overcome the difficulties that will befall him and his family?
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I want Vol. 2 - NOW
- By bebe on 06-04-24
By: Miranda Flan
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Blessing or Burden
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Elaine Burkett
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- Length: 5 hrs and 23 mins
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In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Elizabeth Bennet unexpectedly inherits a large fortune as the story begins. The effects of this surprising situation are, at first, delightful. Elizabeth is able to provide her sisters with suitable dowries as well as a delightful shopping trip in London. As the realities of her situation set in, however, her male friends and neighbors turn into fortune hunters, swamping her with unwanted attention. After a few dangerous scrapes, Elizabeth decides to try her luck in London, hoping that by keeping her good fortune a secret, she can find a suitable ...
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Short but Sweet
- By jaimarie on 09-04-24
By: Elaine Burkett
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Assumed Virtue
- A Sweet Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Victoria Lynn
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- Length: 13 hrs and 28 mins
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What if Mrs. Bennet is a well-educated tradesman’s daughter, Mr. Collins takes his parish duties seriously and Mr. Bennet overcomes his laziness? A clean reimagining of P&P, focusing on the gentlemen of our story.
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Really awful
- By Teresa Kendall on 04-17-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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Lost
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Miranda Flan
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- Length: 9 hrs and 31 mins
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Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth found themselves lost in the middle of a forest, they must resolve their differences and work together to find their way back. What challenges must they face to get home? *
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- By Kindle Costum on 09-25-24
By: Miranda Flan
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Refusing Mr. Collins
- A Pride and Prejudice Possibility
- By: Carrie Mollenkopf
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- Length: 5 hrs and 22 mins
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It is a truth universally acknowledged, that while a man in possession of a fortune may be in want of a wife, there may be ladies who do not reciprocate. This may be especially so when the man in question not only possesses the rightful inheritance of said ladies, but is also of a most odious disposition and less than agreeable in appearance. Such was the lot of five young women near the town of Meryton. Not only had they no fortune, their own father, an absentee parent at best, had not the foresight to put aside a single pound should they not have the opportunity marry. For this sole ...
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Dull
- By Julia Mize on 09-18-24
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Georgiana's Savior, A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Melanie Schertz, A Lady
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Georgiana Darcy made a foolish mistake. One that would have deadly consequences. Believing herself in love with George Wickham, she leaves Ramsgate with him, to make the journey to Gretna Green to elope. During the trip, Georgiana learns the truth of why Wickham wished to marry her, for her fortune. The young lady was able to escape from Wickham, and ends up in the post coach which happens to stop in Meryton. The stop in Meryton is one that will change the lives of all they know and love. Elizabeth Bennet has been given an ultimatum, marry the heir of her father's estate or leave her family...
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Beauty out of Betrayal
- By Kindle Customer on 10-27-24
By: Melanie Schertz, and others
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Saving Jane
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: AnnaMarie Wallace
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- Length: 11 hrs and 37 mins
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The new tenant of Netherfield Park leaves Meryton without offering for Jane. He loves her but is reluctant to take on the support of her entire family in the event of Mr. Bennet's death, Mr. and Mrs. Bennet are thus determined to force Jane to wed Mr. Collins. Lizzy will do anything to save Jane from such a fate! She spirits Jane away to the Gardiners in London. Determined not to let history repeat itself, they introduce themselves to new acquaintances as orphans with no other siblings. Romances flourish with Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy, but the two sisters are all too aware that the ...
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Elizabeth is a fibber
- By bebe on 09-05-24
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Pemberley's Heir
- A Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Jeanna Ellsworth
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- Length: 8 hrs and 44 mins
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Young Fitzwilliam Darcy was born with everything he wanted. However, in a sudden turn of events, he finds he must join the militia to sustain his new, less-endowed life. For five years, he searches for the missing piece in his life; that journey leads him marching into Elizabeth Bennet’s presence on more equal ground. Darcy has no doubt that the sassy and intelligent Elizabeth deserves much more than a lieutenant’s salary can provide. For the first time in five years, Darcy sets out to find his lost heritage so that he can offer marriage for Elizabeth. Elizabeth has no idea that she has...
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Interesting premise, horribly executed.
- By Teresa Kendall on 02-20-24
By: Jeanna Ellsworth
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Lady Fetton's Longbourn Legacy
- A Sweet Pride and Prejudice Variation
- By: Victoria Lynn
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- Length: 12 hrs and 2 mins
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In this clean reimagining of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Thomas Bennet has a much older sister, Marianne, who enters into an arranged marriage when she is fifteen and Thomas is five. The siblings have little contact and no real interest in each other. Marianne is widowed and remarries and in the process becomes Lady Fetton, a Duchess and a very wealthy woman. Years pass and after Marianne is widowed a second time she returns to Longbourn and becomes involved in the lives of the Bennets only weeks before the Bingleys and Darcy arrive at Netherfield. Mr. Darcy and Miss Bingley, ...
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It should've been listed as a vagary, not a variation
- By Shay on 08-29-24
By: Victoria Lynn
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- Anonymous
- 08-29-24
Best variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. Excellent AI narration. Best I’ve heard.
This variation is better than the original version written by Jane Austen. Each of the 5 Bennett sisters are accounted for with wonderful futures.
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- bebe
- 06-03-24
Amazing
This is a fantastic book. Adam Bennett, a new character is introduced. He is Mr. Bennett's son by a wife previous to Fannie Bennett. Adam is the true heir to Longbourne. Adam's mother died in childbirth and Mr. Bennett left the baby in the care of his maternal grandparents. He kept his first marriage and the existence of the baby boy secret. His second wife, Fannie, didn't know of the boy so she was always In fear of being thrown into the hedgerows when Mr. Bennett dies. Adams grandparents died when he was about twelve and Mr. Bennett signed him up in the Navy and virtually forgot about him. Adam flourished in the navy and was a celebrated Captain, later an Admiral. However secrets have a way of coming out and the existence of Adam became known to the Bennett family and others. All the P&P characters, plus some new ones, appear in this book. It is absolutely mesmerizing - I could not stop listening. I highly recommend this book. The only complaint is the virtual voice narration. There are many glitches and too little emotion, but it still does not fatally diminish the enjoyment of the book.
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- Darla
- 09-03-24
Loved Adam!
This was a well written PPV. The story is engaging and the characters are likable. The characters are true to Jane Austen’s beloved characters. I plan to hear it again.
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- Anonymous User
- 10-10-24
Must Read!
Absolutely loved this rendition of Pride and Prejudice. I’m certain Jane Austen would have approved!
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- Julia Mize
- 05-01-24
Unique spin on P&P
This was a good story line. The computer voice was a bit annoying so at times it was hard to focus on the story. But I enjoyed having a different heir for Longbourn
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- Mary T
- 05-10-24
Great JAFF for the Bennetts
Great story from beginning to end. The only complaint is the “Virtual voice” that is happening a lot lately. It’s wooden, says “hashtag “ when typo in script plus “Rossing” instead of Rosings which takes you out the story. There are others and hope that this be recorded over by Stevie Zimmerman or Harry
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- Sharon
- 10-12-24
Unique P&P variation
What if Mr. Bennett was married previously and had a son? That’s the premise of this adaptation, and the author weaves an interesting storyline around this plot.
I read Austen’s original and just accepted the fact that Mr Bennett didn’t manage his property well and the girls had zero dowry. And how Bingley had zero spine and allowed Darcy and his sisters to sway his decision to leave Jane. And how Darcy was arrogant and assumed Elizabeth would just jump at the honor of being his wife with zero effort on his part.
I like when an adaptation takes those facts and weaves the consequences.
In this adaptation, we meet some new characters and learn more about the characters we love and whom we love to hate.
You’re not going to find a lot of Darcy and Elizabeth. But there’s enough to make it enjoyable. What you will find are pretty decent character development with other key players. And. Frankly I enjoyed meeting Mr Bennett’s heir and I was invested in his storyline.
I’ve read or listened to likely 100 P&P variations. This one is unique in its premise. And because of that, it’s worth a listen.
Yes this is virtual voice. Yes this book could use editing. However. It’s a fun variation and I found it worth a listen because of the characterizations and storyline.
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- JTG
- 09-03-24
Good Idea but Poor Execution
I really liked the idea of a Bennet son and heir, but I found the story awkward, uneven, and with odd errors, like using the wrong pronoun (His for a female), repeating something a character says immediately but in slightly different words or having a character do something and then explaining what was done. I don’t know if this is an example of an AI- generated story, but it would explain all the mistakes. And then there is the Virtual Voice unemotional narration.
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- Leslie
- 10-07-24
STARTED GREAT...
I was very pleased with the start of this story: a unique perspective, a great idea for a new plot. All sorts of different things occur, with characters' personalities very different, outcomes with big surprises. First, however, the text needs a good editing...the writing becomes careless at times, the choice of words sloppy, and too much repeat of same things. The worst drawback is the infernal virtual voice, that mispronounces words, and while reading, pronounces, 'HASHTAG', which is only a symbol in the text.
I think this may be a good new writer for P&P variations, but she needs to develop some nuance of characterization and plot, some originality in dialog, so as not to repeat, again and again, the same actions, same emotional arcs. The ending, sadly, is drivel, like a Disney story, or a deus ex machina fixing everything in an instant. I'm addicted to P&P variations, and always hoping for more good writers to come up with something new--Miranda Flan almost got there, then became lazy, dropped the creative ball and left me disappointed.
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